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Forever Yours

Splashing chocolate kisses on your face Making love wishes near make out lake The sky is blue my passion is red Maroon heart true by it we’re lead Like a balloon silver spirits float Thanks to you I have yellow hope In love like birds we chirp and fly Mating call heard seen in green eyes Each day is new emerald exciting Being with you so denim delighting Hold my hand as we explore Life as a dance forever yours

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Valsa George

Date: 5/20/2025 10:39:00 PM

A firm avowal of love. Very romantic and a warm celebration of love. Karen, enjoyed reading your poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 5/21/2025 2:55:00 AM

Thanks for your warm words Valsa!

Anne Winter

Date: 5/20/2025 7:37:00 PM

Dear Karen, a gorgeous poem! Full of imagery and music. Every line is absolutely beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this poem. Best, Anne

Karen Jones
Date: 5/21/2025 2:53:00 AM

So happy you enjoyed Anne! Thank you!

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/19/2025 5:10:00 PM

so lovely and cute, enjoyed all images and music

Karen Jones
Date: 5/19/2025 5:18:00 PM

You are kind to say! Thanks

David Crandall

Date: 5/19/2025 4:06:00 PM

lovely, colorful poem!

Karen Jones
Date: 5/19/2025 5:18:00 PM

Thanks!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/19/2025 11:39:00 AM

Love your love-interweaving! Cute!

Karen Jones
Date: 5/19/2025 12:23:00 PM

Aw thank you Kim!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/19/2025 9:07:00 AM

Dear Karen, What a joyful celebration of love’s wonderful colors and playful moments. I adore how you weave passion and hope with such sweet, imagery, from chocolate kisses to emerald excitement. It feels like a dance of hearts, light and full of promise. Love is truly a beautiful adventure, forever worth exploring together. Spring Blessings, My Dear Karen, Daniel

Karen Jones
Date: 5/19/2025 10:31:00 AM

So happy you liked my writing Daniel! Thanks for your kind words!

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/19/2025 8:11:00 AM

Hello Karen, this is a colourful romantic piece, enjoyed reading it. Loved the ending. Wishing you a great new week ahead, my poet friend.

Karen Jones
Date: 5/19/2025 9:01:00 AM

Appreciate the love and have a happy week!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/19/2025 7:40:00 AM

A colorful poem. Feels like a nursery rhyme.

Karen Jones
Date: 5/19/2025 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Victor!