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Forever Young

What beauty shared with carefree steps, your laughing heart would trip with grace and lift our spirits as you slept - a soul that's swept to our embrace. Unfurrowed brow with silken cheeks that blush with youthful innocence, now safe within a world we'll seek when all our days on earth are spent. So wait Dear Heart, we will be there - older and with tell-tale traces from smiles of stories that we shared reminded of your lovely face. In time, my darling, we will come to find you still forever young.

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Date: 7/2/2019 9:02:00 PM
I have seen this before and appreciate its comfort for the bereaved parent once again. Thanks for the art.
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Date: 7/2/2019 11:27:00 AM
A profound piece deserving of your wonderful win Craig. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2019 6:53:00 AM
So poignant, Craig. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 10/19/2017 9:47:00 PM
I lost my youngest daughter, age 19. I truly understand the faith that it takes to believe in the ultimate reunion. This is a very well formed sonnet. Beautiful.
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