Forever Wish Dished

Wish's Forever Dish Once a stars twinkled beckoning a wish Love desired was wished, when we met, it was dished We loved, as no other could ever imagine Two becoming one in every fashion Twilight found us in warm embrace Never more a star’s wish would we chase When our wished upon star lost its twilight hold and you in turn left from our earthy home a new star was birthed within the heavens winking I gaze on it still our love ever twinkling We melded, like shadows combined and interwoven, against all odds our unity never broken Hands firm, still, on the rails of endless time Soulmates forever starlit entwined © Debra Squyres
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 12:15 AM
such a pretty one. I see it got a win down here. BIG congrats, Debra.
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Hi.
Fisher Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:27 PM
The first stanza really brought me into your poem, and truly enjoyed it in full.
La France Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Debra, your poem is so beautifully written and so full of true love, and thanks for visiting my poem oh the tears and for your thoughtful comment and yes Debra the words are true ~~
Johnson Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:16 PM
You're living in the heaven's Debra. You walk above the ground. Your vision see's beyond today and show's you where you're bound. The soulful sense within your heart shines out for all to see. Every leaf's accounted for on your family tree. :) Peace. :)
Hunjeri Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 11:10 AM
"A new star was birthed within the heavens winking I gaze on it still our love ever twinkling" such a remarkable write!
Squyres Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Thank you, Nijeri Junjeri.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace