Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Poetry/Rhyme/Forever Twined
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-321-01
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 01, 2023
For the Standard contest, Bite Size, No 65
sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 06/10/2023

First Place

Forever Twined

 

I look at the names of those who have died,
like petals blowing you had to leave us;
and tears for poets gone ... I cannot hide.
you went quietly without any fuss !
And we must treasure your words left behind,
in memory you are forever twined !

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Daisy Ward June 13, 2023 at 10:09 AM SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM. Constance La France June 13, 2023 at 6:51 PM Daisy, thank you so much for the compliment !

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2023 at 8:33 AM Wow amazing one for the top spot. Congrats, dear friend Constance La France June 12, 2023 at 7:05 PM Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, I was inspired by your blog !

Roger Roger June 10, 2023 at 9:08 PM Very thoughtful dear... Congratulations... Constance La France June 12, 2023 at 7:05 PM Roger, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !

Unseeking Seeker June 10, 2023 at 6:17 PM Back again with warmest congratulations on your top win! Constance La France June 12, 2023 at 7:06 PM Seeker, thank you so much for the congratulations !

Anisha Dutta June 10, 2023 at 7:46 AM Nice Tribute Big Congrats to win Top. Hugs Constance La France June 12, 2023 at 7:06 PM Anisha, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats !

Jack Horne June 5, 2023 at 5:30 AM a lovely tribute, my friend - thanks for the place in your contest (I think I've missed quite a few since then) Constance La France June 5, 2023 at 7:12 AM Jack, thank you so much for the compliment, so many have left us, you are welcome on your win, and enter anytime you can, I know you are caring for your mother !

Unseeking Seeker June 1, 2023 at 9:17 PM A truly sublime tribute, Constance Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 3:48 PM Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment !

Marikate Kingston June 1, 2023 at 7:36 PM Lovely, for many to read. I am especially fond of your last line. Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 3:49 PM Marikate, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate !

Kim Rodrigues June 1, 2023 at 3:17 PM So many petals…nice tribute Constance La France June 3, 2023 at 3:49 PM Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, yes so many lost petals !