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Poetry/Rhyme/Forever Twined
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1551-321-01
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 01, 2023
For the Standard contest, Bite Size, No 65
sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 06/10/2023

First Place

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I look at the names of those who have died, like petals blowing you had to leave us; and tears for poets gone ... I cannot hide. you went quietly without any fuss ! And we must treasure your words left behind, in memory you are forever twined !

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Date: 6/13/2023 10:09:00 AM
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM.
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Date: 6/13/2023 6:51:00 PM
Daisy, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 6/11/2023 8:33:00 AM
Wow amazing one for the top spot. Congrats, dear friend
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 7:05:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, I was inspired by your blog !
Date: 6/10/2023 9:08:00 PM
Very thoughtful dear... Congratulations...
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 7:05:00 PM
Roger, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 6/10/2023 6:17:00 PM
Back again with warmest congratulations on your top win!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 7:06:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the congratulations !
Date: 6/10/2023 7:46:00 AM
Nice Tribute Big Congrats to win Top. Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2023 7:06:00 PM
Anisha, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats !
Date: 6/5/2023 5:30:00 AM
a lovely tribute, my friend - thanks for the place in your contest (I think I've missed quite a few since then)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/5/2023 7:12:00 AM
Jack, thank you so much for the compliment, so many have left us, you are welcome on your win, and enter anytime you can, I know you are caring for your mother !
Date: 6/1/2023 9:17:00 PM
A truly sublime tribute, Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:48:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 6/1/2023 7:36:00 PM
Lovely, for many to read. I am especially fond of your last line.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:49:00 PM
Marikate, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 6/1/2023 3:17:00 PM
So many petals…nice tribute
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Constance La France
Date: 6/3/2023 3:49:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, yes so many lost petals !

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