Forever Playing

~

The melodic 
beat of 
your sunset
heart
is the 
perfect 
rhythm to the 
beautiful  
love song
forever playing
in my
midnight 
dreams

~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chircop Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 1:24 PM
What a beautiful moment when the one plays in our dream..A selfish moment one wouldn't want to share nor let it come to an end.I hate it when I wake up in half a dream :)
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 1:26 PM
I know what you mean, I am the same way. Thanks so much Charmaine. I'm glad you liked this one.
Sands Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:17 AM
This is so soft and smooth. Beautifully written and calms me today :)
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Thank you my friend, so very much
Mcintosh Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 6:56 AM
Beautiful... Love it. Bless you, Gina
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so very much Gina.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:20 AM
Delicate dazzling masterpiece, Chris.
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:02 AM
I appreciate your kindness Caren
There Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 10:57 PM
I like "Forever Playing" in so many ways, like a poem in and of itself ;) But the poem is so much more as well... Loved this, Chris!
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so very much HT for your kind thoughts
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 6:57 PM
I am with Sandy. ... SIGH!!!
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much Andrea
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 6:29 PM
sigh....sometimes i have no words to compare to the beauty in your poetry, this is another gorgeous write flowing from your pen tonight my dear friend...your poems always amaze me... hugs :)
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Sandy. I always look forward to your visits and you kind thoughts
Bauer Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 5:40 PM
damn, you're good, chris! how do you do it?
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:01 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
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