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'forever Nascent'

quivering with each kiss the wind blows
the leaves imitate my life
nascent when on the ground


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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/15/2011 10:11:00 PM

Nicely written Wilma.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2011 8:49:00 AM

Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Wilma. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 6:48:00 PM

Dear Wilma,, how are you?? you are such a swiffff poet.. love the way you make it seems the words just flow out of you.. right after you feel the perfect image and words... love it...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/14/2011 7:18:00 PM

happy weekend Wilma .. came back for seconds with this lovely piece my friend...luv..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/12/2011 4:13:00 PM

Nothing would do but to look up the word nascent. Knew it existed but not the meaning. You wove it beautifully in this lovely vers dear friend. Hugs :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2011 7:11:00 PM

So beautiful, Wilma. I like the way you compare your life to the leave and the first line -- wow! I'll be away a while, hon. Love you, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 10/10/2011 9:25:00 AM

An enjoyable write here Wilma.Very nice.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/9/2011 11:17:00 PM

Captures the moment so well Wilma, love the analogy you describe. Luv

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2011 5:35:00 AM

wonderful way to describe one's life. love this. Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2011 11:55:00 PM

LOVELY WILMA,,, i love the potential life has,when it imitates a simple kiss or more.... enjoyed,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2011 9:39:00 AM

good morning!! Thanks or your comment on my poem. Beautiful kimo you have here very seasonally correct!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2011 7:41:00 PM

wow this is lovely. For Carol's contest, Wilma?

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/7/2011 7:36:00 PM

Awesome Kimo, Wilma! Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 4:42:00 PM

wow three lines of incredible emotion and descriptive imagery Wilma... amazing the analogy and metaphoric language..much success in the contest my friend.. we are moving all this month so have not been on PS as much..what a big job...but very exciting...happy weekend..luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/7/2011 3:51:00 PM

hahaha ok fine- I will use those red toenails to snag a doctor!-- hahaha I hope you are ok with a foot doctor :D lol!!! from heart to foot? oh my my , but hmm for touch points or something I think (ok I am pretending) that the foot is close to the heart... ok bye!!! wish me luck!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/7/2011 3:42:00 PM

yup, happy to read this here, missy :) and I am so glad that crazy minds think alike! haha :D wonderful, hopeful thoughts here-- have to say, I loved that first line the best ;) ok, ok, I am going now soon-to-be-mrs.-heart- doctor-if-i-can-find-you-one.... hahaha :D mwahugs <3 I got a toenail to catchm eenie meenie miney mo!

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