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Forever my love my starving heart beats At the path of velvet red rose petals Scattered towards the lull of satin sheets Where there we settle under prism crystals We trace benignly through romantic sighs With the waning and ebbing of the night Wisp of light prancing round like candlelight Yielding to rose petals unsettle sight Before the serene ardent night is gone And the breath of golden sun rises the dawn, And the clouds yawn opens the quietness. I'm drawn to your inner rainbow sweetness. ~ Forever my love my starving heart beats. my eyes feast Just for you For I love you 1/1/2022 Sponsor BJ Legros Kelley Contest Name Forever My Love Valentine

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Date: 2/10/2022 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful love poem. A wonderful Valentine's Day to you. Have a blessed day......................
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Date: 2/9/2022 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your high placing win Eve and thank you for being a part of this contest. This is such a precious poem and I hope you have a wonderful Valentine's Day with your beloved! <3 ~BJ
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Date: 1/4/2022 10:03:00 AM
That's quite a beautiful piece; full of wonderful sentiments. A super write!
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Date: 1/2/2022 10:04:00 PM
The most beautiful love poem I have ever read Eve, tender, romantic and bittersweet, love it. xo
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Date: 1/2/2022 12:48:00 PM
Hello Eve, a lovely romantic poem. Filled with a strong bond of love. Happy New Year. Hugs.
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Date: 1/2/2022 7:44:00 AM
- Beautifully written, Eve :) - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2022 1:20:00 AM
What a lovely poetic composition. Now who does he remind me of. Friends past and present forever. Hugs.
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