Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Forever Loving

Sounds of a great mountain roar
trembling echoes 
a shaking voice,
flooding down the face
a river of tears 
inside each drop 
treasured sparkling crystals
pearl jewels weep.

Brings new life 
honey as joy sweetly blushing 
desires your beauty ,
Crowned queen of the flies bouquet colors,
a butterfly dances floats upon a sun lighting rays,
touching inside with warm wings 
sweeping an angel.

Sweet gently skipping desire 
hot pulse beats star lighting passion 
glows behind the jewels,
baby you shine beautifully bright 
when the thunder roars 
beast of reality natures lion.

Loves arrow strikes 
deeply blushing red
under a pink moon ,
sweetly embracing together 
kissing forever spirit of the night
sparkling always uniting under your love,
when our dream becomes true
into eternity hand in hand 
one masterpiece 
walking to paradise 
adoring the picture within you.

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Paul Schneiter September 27, 2014 at 1:18 PM Dear Liam, This poem has breathtaking imagery and commendable flow. Moreover, it packs an emotional wallop. In short, I think it's wonderful. Thank you for creating it and posting it. * * * And thank you for your kind words about "Mother." Please know that I value and appreciate them. Liam Mcdaid September 27, 2014 at 1:36 PM thank you paul truly deeply for the amazing beautiful comment smiling a mother is always a blessing deeply appreciated

Richard Lamoureux September 24, 2014 at 8:01 AM I'm not sure which I enjoyed more, the poem or the tremendous comments it inspired. Bravo Liam. Liam Mcdaid September 24, 2014 at 8:19 AM thank you richard smiling i enjoyed every last comment thank you deeply dear friend god bless

Gautami Phookan September 24, 2014 at 2:50 AM Liam :) Love how you phrase your words,, your thoughts are very beautiful! '...under a pink moon'?.. Yours, it looks like an enchanting world,, I'm sure there must be wild lilies and blue violets too, and the last line.. I loved it so much! Liam Mcdaid September 24, 2014 at 8:15 AM thank you gautami for the heart touching beautiful comment bless you it can be a magical world

Jan Allison September 23, 2014 at 3:18 PM such a beautiful write Liam - a joy to read a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx Liam Mcdaid September 23, 2014 at 3:52 PM thank you jan wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend bless you

Debbie Guzzi September 23, 2014 at 2:38 PM so nice to feel this way ... I hope you always will [butterfly dances float - exquisite] Light & Love Liam Mcdaid September 23, 2014 at 2:49 PM ahh debbie hope so too thank you deeply very beautiful comment god bless smiling

Maurice Yvonne September 23, 2014 at 8:45 AM This is a beautiful write. An excellent read. Thank you. Liam Mcdaid September 23, 2014 at 8:59 AM ah maurice you're so very kind heartfelt appreciated god bless

Demetrios Trifiatis September 23, 2014 at 5:38 AM My friend Liam, my yesterday's comment was prophetic as you became the poet of the day, a well-deserved victory! I am.... afraid there is going to be another one coming with this masterpiece of a poem! Congratulations my friend! Another 7! Liam Mcdaid September 23, 2014 at 8:01 AM ah demetrious brought tears to my eyes thank you from the bottom of my heart for being so kind heartfelt beautiful comment bless you