Forever Love and Me-Collab

The winds of happiness blew a smile upon my face It's warm breeze kissed my lips as I surrenderd to its embrace The flowers surrounding us hugged my heart with their early rise Laying with my love in peaceful bliss we gazed across the sunlit skies A pillow like cloud rolling past causes a gentle sunshine rain There's laughter in my voice as we decide to race the wind in vain With our hearts beating fast we stop to rest underneath a tree Embracing with sighs and tender kisses,from my love to me This day my love will stay forever in my heart and mind Knowing that a love like ours will never be easy to find If I could remember a day this would be the one I long to see A perfect day running through the fields,my forever love and me
A collaboration with Germaine Pasley :o) Dan Kearley:12-21-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/27/2011 3:28:00 PM
Glad I stopped in to read and found this gem.. Great work the 2 of you have done!! very good... Michael
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Date: 12/26/2011 8:37:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Dan! :) I enjoyed lots! Always, Laura
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Date: 12/25/2011 9:54:00 AM
Dan this is so beautiful...Thank you for the comment on my poem..Merry Christmas :)
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Date: 12/24/2011 2:46:00 PM
I think it is beautiful, just a great job from the two of you. The whole effect is gentle and romantic! :)
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Date: 12/23/2011 4:25:00 AM
Beautiful Dan ...Thinking i may just stay ;) Happy christmas
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Journey Mcknight
Date: 12/23/2011 2:31:00 PM
she has her mind set on him, she's got her mind set on him.... :) doesn't bother me, all I want is Gods will, soon as she THOUGHT, well, I told her, he is famous...shes stayin'
Date: 12/22/2011 9:15:00 PM
I don't pretend to be an expert on poetry or anything like that. I just know what I like and what I don't like. Reading your poem made me feel pleasant. It was beautiful and has an awesome warm feeling about it, it was totally dope.
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Date: 12/22/2011 9:02:00 AM
fix my name you fool haha. it has an E at the end of Germaine....we work well together :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/22/2011 10:08:00 AM
Sorry about that. :o)
Date: 12/22/2011 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful Dan,you are brilliant. SMILE - oxox hug Anne-Lise
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/22/2011 10:09:00 AM
Thank you very much :-)
Date: 12/21/2011 10:37:00 PM
You and Germain did a fine job together.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/22/2011 10:07:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/21/2011 6:42:00 PM
ummm.. getta room? .. lol, namaste~N
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Dan Kearley
Date: 12/21/2011 6:47:00 PM
Ha,ha,ha,ha :oP
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