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Forever Love

~~ I find him down a long road, His name engraved in cold stone; But our love is forever, In my broken heart. His gentle way, his kind soul, Falling in love was easy; Walks in rain, snow and sunshine, Oh, I miss my love . . . __________________________ February 5, 2015 Poetry/Dodoitsu/My Broken Heart Copyright Protected, ID 02-638-406-05 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Date: 2/11/2015 3:58:00 PM
full of your emotion, this is so beautiful and sad!
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:13:00 AM
Ahh!! I feel the sadness in this one..Great emotive work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:59:00 PM
I'm feeling your pain tonight in these touching poems. The love you write about here is the kind that lasts forever...sending healing prayers...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/5/2015 5:24:00 PM
Such a beautiful, heartfelt poem! I enjoyed it. :)
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Date: 2/5/2015 10:51:00 AM
This captures the edge of pain. A surreal look at depression in all its guises dealing with the death of a loved one. Emile.
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Date: 2/5/2015 10:04:00 AM
so touching - beautiful dodoitsu good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:21:00 AM
- So touching - but beautifully written B.W. - I wish you best of luck in the contest! - // Anne-Lise :)
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