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Forever Love2

My true love for you fashioned in my ink, our wishes granted, and sensed innermost, our path composed now forever a link, for us as one, in love my heart, yours host. Passionate, our moments are creative, together, our dreams are awakening, for living and not existence; alive, lonely instants no longer frightening, Silent times in presence, reassuring, thoughts of us apart, never, relentless, we are meant, as one, together sharing, our emotions and thoughts in sync, seamless. Created in our Lords image, we shine, this honour bestowed on us, how divine. 09/14/2016 Contest - sonnet 4 Finalised - 9/23/2016

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Date: 9/24/2016 2:45:00 PM
Mark, love your poem :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/25/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Eve - I do appreciate my placement so much - your positive comments always inspire me to continue to write Regards, Mark
Date: 9/24/2016 2:40:00 PM
Mark-YES! created in the Lords image we definitely DO shine, right!?! so divine....loved this sonnet dear man...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/25/2016 11:40:00 PM
Thank you luloo - I enjoyed writing this sonnet - my own style, I try not to be influenced by other poetry yet try and learn from it at the same time - make sense? Regards, Mark
Date: 9/24/2016 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Mark...
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Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 9/25/2016 11:38:00 PM
Thank you Charlie - much appreciated Regards, Mark

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