Kai Michael Neumann Poet Lay

Forever Lei

Forever

When the moon burst it cracked a smile

To marry in radiant style


The North Star seals young glowing love

Brings kindness and light from above


A beach fire sparks vows with a chime

Gives birth ties tides ever in time


Waxed in passion foot prints take sight

Sunshine seals dawn out of the night


28th December 2019

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Richard Lamoureux January 27, 2020 at 8:30 AM I like how pleasing these words are, they painted lovely images in my mind.

Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:37 PM Beautiful verse, Kai, congratulations your win. Eve Kai Michael Neumann January 17, 2020 at 3:42 AM Thank you Eve. Kind wishes, Kai

Charles Messina January 16, 2020 at 8:20 AM Great write, Kai. Nicely done my friend. Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie

Sandra Adams December 30, 2019 at 8:24 PM beautiful Kai...all of my favorites (beach, moon, sun) in one poem... wonderful penning... Happy New Year my friend :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2019 at 4:21 PM Very nicely done, Kai! Great title too!

Anil Deo December 28, 2019 at 5:34 PM otherworldly and yet, similar to the Nativity night. Thansk for reaching for the heavens, Kai. Kai Michael Neumann December 29, 2019 at 6:37 AM Thank you Anil. I appreciate you reading and liking my poetry. Happy New Year and Happy Writing, Kai

Juliet Ligon December 28, 2019 at 3:42 PM Enjoyed this romantic scene. Lovely take on the contest. Kai Michael Neumann December 29, 2019 at 6:42 AM Thank you Juliet. I must watch the sun rise tomorrow ...

Janice Canerdy December 28, 2019 at 7:57 AM Such awesome imagery, Kai! Janice Kai Michael Neumann December 28, 2019 at 8:50 AM Thank you Janice. The poem is an anniversary poem for my wife Tai.