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Forever Is Our Prayer

FOREVER IS OUR PRAYER When petals climb to reach their swell they ray a hue 'neath the sun's spell so are the hearts that rise to quell wings of love fluttering yell Twenty-four seven we walk the talk no dull moments left there to float Distance crossed our joyful tears touched pushing our smile to rush to ace flash Love's peak: its urgency we don't wanna let go Falling, falling deeply in love is what we show nights young where at the gazebo, you hold my gaze let alone my lips you confine so chaste The heavens aegis with twinkling stars they suddenly deliver some liquid pour Unmindful of such, we amble round chirping crickets hum our background sound Scents of lavender hover the room air as there and then you hold my hips for a floor dance Night gone old but our holds began their mould Upon hills and caves we clamour to surrender Beats and breathing leaps and pounds like a drum Ah! Even the lazy moon strum his guitar Us twine like the ivy fall softly on sheets Sharing a flood of sweats and sweets Sad, there is two years and more we need to hurdle but this better than never taking the risk Wired and wind, us, we vow for more than ten days as forever together we crave in our prayers. __________________________________________ O.E. GUILLERMO 9:47 am, May 1, 2015

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Date: 11/29/2015 5:24:00 AM
Golly! how did I miss this Gem Olive. It's lovely, and it's us. Glad you read this one out to me yesterday ~~ Hugs//James & congrats for POTD ~~ XX
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Date: 11/28/2015 10:41:00 PM
Olive, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 5/3/2015 1:36:00 AM
A truly lovely piece and I got a visual of that, "lazy old moon", "strumming his guitar".
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 12:35:00 PM
thank you so much ML, hugs.. :)!//olive eloisa
Date: 5/2/2015 10:13:00 AM
My very dear friend, Olive, you write so well with passion and grace. Hugging and loving so much this precious gem of yours. I'm so glad to read it this evening. Thank you so much for sharing! May I also have this opportunity to thank you for your precious time to visit and leave inspiring words on my dedication poem to Vigan. Hope I can join you on your visit on this place someday. God bless you my very dear friend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/1/2015 4:50:00 PM
Sweet, beautiful and true love. Romance is definitely in the air in your write, Olive. Another of your lovely poems depicting what love could be, should be between two people totally into each other. HUgs! Kim :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 12:34:00 PM
thank you so much Kim.. :)!//olive eloisa

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