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Forever, In Your Keep

Words of spoken love fall deaf upon thy soul, recall the joy of then When we held hands, when we saw the moon oh sweet sparkling light of trule love The light reveals all when present, nothing can hide in the dark, and so I emerged Yet all there is left of you is the memory, the scenes that replay again and again How can I ever get past the most beautiful time I have ever lived Reason with my soul, and you will see I truly am crazy, stuck in the depth of your name It is your very smile that drives the dreams inside me, and I wont fall asleep Only in my ever lasting sleep can I ever put you past the banks of my all knowing Spread thy wings and fly high, as I recall you showed me how to love, and so I fell by myself Long are the hours, oh what pain will I describe in my speech, none to match your judgment As far as i breathe a scene comes to my eyes, and you live once again by me You were the color of my every stage, and I your favorite actor, yet one must know all ends Today it is I whom leaves, I whom weeps of sour days that fall into history Tomorrow I pray it isnt you, for you deserve better, and I your worst routine Never did I mean to be whom I was, I dont blame you for leaving, be happy and I too will be Just know that no matter where you are, in my heart you are, and I in your keep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/5/2010 10:29:00 PM
nicely done on the expression you write in this one,..p.d.
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:01:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your love, Edward! Have a nice week and thank you for your comments...Gert
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful love poem..it seems this heart is still beating..passionately..Hope She would hear..lovely..Charma.
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:52:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Edward. Have a nice weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 8:16:00 PM
heartfelt poem. enjoyed
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Date: 4/30/2010 2:49:00 PM
Great poem. I love how you sound like you understand why she left because you sound so...so calm about it like even though you cared a lot you never really believe she could really be in love with you...and so when you left it's like you always thought would happen, so your not so bitter about it. I don't know that's just my perspective. Enjoyed the read. Keep it up. Love Destiny
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Date: 4/30/2010 1:24:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Sounds like love that was and now is gone...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2010 12:52:00 PM
very nice write well done enjoyed and have a great weekend faleshia
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