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Forever In Your Eyes

Fervent wish within your eyes speaking with realistic
Optimism, visible for hope for the future 
Reflecting exquisite dream-fullness of mystic nights in your eyes 
Ethereal, you are in this perfect world of ours
Volcanic and miraculous things happen with a touch of
Euphoria as we feast with whirling ecstasy in our souls that fights for ever
Refreshing, in such a delicate way that it seems too perfect

I imagine your eyes speaking to me as we venture through 
Newfound impulsive existence welcoming universe

Your questions always answered, like the waves coming in from the
Ocean, as we sit embracing on each other’s warmth, watching time pass 
Under a roof of celestial stars, until each dawn waxes and wanes
Rapidly breathing deep into the golden sand of our sandcastle

Envisioning our life together, willingly, and joyfully blooming spirit
Youth in a blink, as high in the branches rendering to fields of beauty
Extending to the golden illuminating rays of sunlight 
Safe, spacious, life binding with God’s sight


7/13/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/27/2016 4:53:00 PM
This is BEAUTIFUL Eve! The imagery in this piece is so outstanding. Congratulations on your bigh placement! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem x Beautiful x
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:38:00 PM
A lovely piece, Eve, words fizz like magnesium in water. And that is probably the most bizarre comment you're going to get all year. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:58:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your Second Place podium win on your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:36:00 PM
Eve, this is so wonderful lovely lady! You hold a true gift and are blessed, thanks for sharing and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:23:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:06:00 AM
Hi Eve, This is so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on your 2 nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/24/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Eve to win on your too nice a piece Hugs.
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:48:00 AM
Just a wonderfully romantic poem. Congrats on fine placement!
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:43:00 PM
a beautiful acrostic Eve good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2016 8:26:00 AM
Hello Eve, Your Acrostic here is outstanding. Best Wishes and Best of Luck in the contest. You may have the "Winner" here. Exquisitely rendered imagery. A "7" + FAV for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:05:00 AM
Hi Eve, This was beautiful and romantic. Good luck in the contest.A big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/13/2016 11:12:00 PM
Such a beautiful acrostic..good luck:)
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