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Forever In My Heart

Looking out across the morning sky Amazed at the beautiful sunrise In which, I see your ravishing smile And against my skin, a warm summer breeze As gentle as your touch, falls upon me Releasing a gentle sigh I watch the sunlight glisten off the ocean tide Reminding me of the imperial sparkle in your hazel eyes The thought of your sumptuous kiss brings me to my knees As a familiar sensation washes over me In your arms, the whole world disappears The beating of your heart, the only sound I hear Our moments of togetherness are in complete unity You captured my heart, you complete me The magnitude of the love we share, cannot be denied It comes around once in a lifetime Wherever you may be, near or far My love, you will be, Forever In My Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/18/2012 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Lorie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Lorie, on your charming poem winning the first round. Wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest again Lorie. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Lorie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:13:00 PM
Lorie, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:30:00 AM
great poem! i loved how it was with nature too! great great job! :)
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:07:00 AM
Lorie, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Lorie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:27:00 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:42:00 PM
absolutely lovely, thoroughly enjoyed this poem
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:23:00 AM
Cherish it, Lorie. We never know when it will be interupted by death. Then our memories must sustain us. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Lorie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:21:00 PM
This speaks to me and touched me. I completely relate to this poem. It speaks of a lot of emotions... Very powerful words you have here. Btw, congratulations on ebony highlighted this week. Have fun and take care. =) Lizann
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Date: 6/28/2010 11:15:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:44:00 AM
What a beautiful piece - many congrats on your well deserved feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lorie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2010 6:56:00 PM
really good, especially for your first. im slightly new too, and i was remembering how i thought people would react to it. its summer days. good job and welcome!
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Date: 4/30/2010 12:51:00 PM
very nice write and so sweet welcome to poetry soup and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/30/2010 12:35:00 PM
amazing poetry! good write and welcome to the soup!- always urs edward
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