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Forever In My Heart

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)I am never without it" Quote _ by E.E. Cummings My sweet love, you will always be in my heart Breath of my very breath, your enchanting soul You stay locked inside me, never to depart, Being without you, I could never be whole. When I think of you my eyes become teary Recalling so many thrilling times we shared, I struggle to move beyond, I grow weary, But then, I recall how very much you cared. Where'er I go, dear, I carry you along It is comforting to know I'm not alone, Forever, you are my verse; you are my song Here in my heart, keeping me ever your own, So, as time passes, I long to be with you In other lovely places when life is through. [2. Lost to Heaven – My Wife] FIRST PLACE WINNER Written September 3, 2022 Submitted to “Writing Challenge – In My Heart – S Forms” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance LaFrance [rhymes checked with RhymeZone; 11-syllable lines checked with HMS.com]

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2022 1:02:00 PM

Sorry for your loss. I can feel the pain. Congratulations on this great winning work. Way to go. Sara

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/7/2022 7:25:00 PM

Thank you, Sara. I really appreciate your thoughts.

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2022 5:56:00 AM

Milt, a beautiful Sonnet and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, I feel your heartbreak, Constance

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/7/2022 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Constance. I truly enjoyed writing for your contest and always look forward to another one.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/6/2022 2:44:00 AM

We carry our loved ones wherever we go and always, forever! This is poignantly true!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2022 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Caren.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/4/2022 12:43:00 AM

Such a tender writing of a Special woman who lives on in your heart Milton. A touching piece that is written from the most loving part of someones heart. It is your heart and these emotions written are yours and only yours to carry within until you meet your Love Deb. I got emotional reading this Milton. I hope you are well. If I get emotional reading, I can't imagine how you feel about writing such a tender and personal message. You talk about your cardio workouts, I just had one after reading.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/4/2022 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/4/2022 12:45:00 AM

Be well my friend and thank you for sharing...

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/3/2022 1:43:00 PM

This is poetry of a deep melancholy nature. I love everything about it except that in order to have written it, you lost your sweet Deb. I sincerely hope this sonnet shows up on the winning list. It's now in my list of favorites.

Jenna Logan
Date: 9/3/2022 2:20:00 PM

Mending is always good for the heart and soul.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/3/2022 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jenna. It will soon be four years. I renewed contact with an old friend this afternoon I had last heard from when Deb died. Perhaps the last fence to be mended?