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Forever In My Heart

Love is a painting, daubed, perchance on someone’s heart A folly when it flutters, a mystery dank and dark. Romance is mostly happenstance whispers wafting in the night, What if’s - floating yesterdays never quite in sight. Love paints a heart with madness, bright colors lined in black But always adds a tree -lined road, forever winding back. COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(23) any theme any form Contest Judged: 10/9/2020 10:07:00 PM Sponsored by: Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Hannington Mumo

Date: 6/28/2021 10:37:00 AM

An imagerically lustrous composition on Love...a truly commendable literary effort. Kudos!

David Scott

Date: 1/26/2021 6:11:00 AM

Hi stoped by to read your poem again a beautiful right xx

David Scott

Date: 1/7/2021 5:45:00 PM

Readd Ing your poem again floating yesturdays love the flow sense of longing looking back moving forward ???

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/18/2020 10:58:00 AM

"Beautiful" Yes, "Love is a painting." Your pen was writing love. Enjoy your day/weekend with blessings................

David Scott

Date: 12/3/2020 7:35:00 PM

Lovly poem love the last verse like looking back on past relationships what ifs and maybes why we all strive for love dont always find like the pattern a nice mesage in there too davidscottx

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/4/2020 4:53:00 AM

Yes, we do tend to wonder. Glad my poem gave you pause for thought. Have a great day. SuZ

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/15/2020 3:56:00 PM

Hello Suzanne … a fine poem of love and its colours that can change with moods. The final verse offers a hint of how one got there - thanks again Suzanne - Lindsay

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/17/2020 5:09:00 AM

Hi Lindsay: Glad you enjoyed. Hope your week is going well. SuZ

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/23/2020 1:22:00 PM

The dark mysteries of the heart, I love the line 'bright colors lined in black' - so complex and intriguing!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/23/2020 4:47:00 PM

Hi Michelle: Glad you enjoyed. Will stop over and visit soon. Cheers, SuZ

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 10/11/2020 7:18:00 AM

Your final stanza is inspired. Well written, Suzanne.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/11/2020 9:05:00 AM

Hello Geoffrey: Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice comment. Hope you are well and enjoying the coming season. I look for these small moments of inspiration more and more. Fond wishes, SuZ

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2020 12:32:00 PM

Suzanne, you express love and romance with light and dark imagery spilling easily from your gifted pen. Congratulations for your wonderful win.. ~Susan

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/20/2020 12:05:00 PM

Thanks Susan: Appreciate your stopping by to read and comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/9/2020 7:40:00 AM

You summed up love well in your verse Suzanne, hope you're keeping well. Tom

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/9/2020 7:44:00 AM

Great to hear from you,Tom: Thanks for reading and commenting. Cheers, SuZ.