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Forever Fragile Flower Premiere Contest Winner

Lay softly still my forever fragile flower For the wind will swiftly surely come And sway you back and forth on the hour Before the coming calming summer sun Your bashful beauty beguilingly beckons Within the subtle skies of bathing blue For one day you’ll be gone in seconds And that is the day I shall miss you Your petals perched like a quixotic queen Your saintly strength shining through Your pain pours down the evergreen Your sacred selfless smile bids adieu Gently blooming in heavens diamond dome Where birds and butterflies romantically roam. April.23.2017 My Hero - Contest Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton Dedicated to my hero...my mom Emma...who is suffering from multiple myeloma...although she is very fragile...she still shows inner strength and beauty...

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Date: 5/18/2017 5:16:00 AM
Oh this is so beautiful; the perfect sonnet. Congratulations on your amazing win :))
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Date: 5/18/2017 9:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sneha...god bless...^WW^
Date: 5/3/2017 6:19:00 PM
WW, your beautiful Sonnet images your loving tribute to your dear mom so well. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win in the contest. 7, Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2017 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...all the best my friend...^WW^
Date: 5/1/2017 5:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/2/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Mohamed...^WW^
Date: 4/30/2017 2:22:00 PM
Lovely poem! Congrats on your top win, Winged Warrior. Janice
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Janice...^WW^
Date: 4/30/2017 5:39:00 AM
You beautifully expressed your deep love and respect for your mother. Thank you.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Felicia...^WW^
Date: 4/30/2017 5:14:00 AM
beguilingly beautiful and touching speaks volumes. completely filled my brief congrats on 1st place hugs
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Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Shadow...^WW^
Date: 4/24/2017 6:11:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your mother and good luck to you WW!
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Akkina...^WW^
Date: 4/24/2017 8:18:00 AM
A beautiful dedication, WW. May your mom's inner strength and beauty always be an inspiration to you.
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Sheila...^WW^
Date: 4/24/2017 12:21:00 AM
You have woven such beauty in your words, WW! Best of luck to you in the contest my friend.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 5/2/2017 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Wolfie...^WW^

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