Forever Fiery

fiery forever flaming grief of fear furnace... fuels the faithless hopelessness-haven heating hypocrites' hatred... helpless habitat fleeing from hell*'s doom soul seeks freedom through God's love... offered by Christ's grace enjoying pardon never anymore hell-bound... heart worships the Lord trusting the Saviour warning others from hell's wrath**... I pray and reach-out.
*Matthew 23:33 Ye serpents, ye generation of vipers, how can ye escape the damnation of hell? **Luke 3:7 Then said he to the multitude that came forth to be baptized of him, O generation of vipers, who hath warned you to flee from the wrath to come? March 27, 2023 8th place, "Hell Haiku" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Robert James Liguori; judged on 3/27/2023.
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Gayagay Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 5:29 AM
Wow, these are beautifully written! Haiku form and alliteration. Congrats, Kabayan, on your win.
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful writing with many alliterations. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:46 PM
I like the hope in this one Beata. Congratulations on your win! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Love that you delivered the hopeful side! Yes, now is the time to choose! Let them choose God! Congratulations, Beata!
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