Forever

In the afterglow
Of the fire’s burn
Our breath now slow
Nothing more to learn

For tonight we were
Open books to each other
Clothes flying in a blur
Skin and spots to discover

A trembling quake
Rose up from my waist
As I flooded like a lake
After your first taste

Lips like velvet
Sucked into mine
Never to forget
As we intertwined

A joyous squeal
Let out so loudly
As I finally got to feel
You being enveloped by me

Over and over again
We sang out our praise
And shook when
It was our final phase

Collapsing on your wet skin
We lay there gasping
You still within
Hands still grasping

Rolling off to your side
You held me close to you
At the same time we sighed
And forever our hearts were through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/25/2013 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Poet Destroyer! And ya that's what I was going for Drake! But your poem inspired it all! Ammazing poem dude!
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Date: 11/25/2013 2:11:00 PM
My oh my...I am genuinely grinning & stunned at the same time. That last line is the essential line of the entire writing. Want/Need, all intertwined into a connection that goes beyond skin's depth. This...this was awesome! =D
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:59:00 PM
wow... Now that is hot passion... Love the -Lips like velvet sucked into mine. - The end sounds like an end... Elissa, the flow and imagery are tasty... enjoyed...LINDA
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