Forever

A certain kind of forever passed by today –
It was coiled up and corked in a bottle,
And as I watched it ride the ripples
Of the clouds in dank sky,
I sat in wonder –
 
I thought about the gripping restlessness –
That forever would eradicate,
The funnel of emptiness
Engorging my heart,
That forever would calm –
 
I contemplated, deliberated and toyed –
With the notion of that forever,
Out of grasp, out of reach
Enlarging my need,
Oh that timeless forever –
 
I watched as that forever passed by –
Caressed by the glass of antiquity,
And as it rode out of sight
Into sky’s vastness,
My wonder throbbed –

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/20/2011 8:33:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Deborah. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2010 3:52:00 PM
Very nice poetry, Deborah S. I think this is the first times that I have read your work on poetry soup. (I think that I read some before with music around the time that Michael Jackson died. How are you doing? Do you visit Poetry Soup much? I noticed that you had sponsored some contest that was not yet judged. I don't remember seeing it listed until It was in the judging status. What ever happened on that? It was about Medieval times. I do hope all is well with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:11:00 AM
My friend send "soupmail" replys. etc. I am very determined and just need some quidance. Will you read some of my work" Also you can see my pic and brief bio @ prisonpenpals.com, you can find me Alphabetical by last name or by state I'm in NC. Will you please soupmail me back with your comments, criticism, publishing info, and if you found me on prisonpenpals. com..thank you for your time Miss Deborah Simpson..Jimmy
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:07:00 AM
This is for soup mail but can't get into your: Hi, my best friend sent me printouts on contest still being viewed-I noticed you've wrote a book "Chronicles of a Sage: Simple Complexities"- Through my work you'll notice several pieces I've wrote about me being a inmate and about my losses..My dream is to publish my own book: A compilation of poetry-Can you give me "tips", who to contact..etc.? I have 18 months left...My freind has set me up with my own Poetry Soup Account..and he posts my work.
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Date: 8/29/2009 8:49:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Deborah! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:06:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:07:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:17:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Deborah.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/21/2009 5:12:00 AM
if only.................Dearest Deb, how are you doing my friend. Hope life is treating you better since last we spoke. Love and blessings to you and yours, Carol
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:06:00 AM
artful and thoughtful. john h loving iii
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