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Replaced, if you ever were to me life have no color. It would be dark without no noise without no spark without no joys. To have you by my side to always hear your call to see your smiling faces is the greatest gift of all. Thank you for always being there, in my life helping me get through my pain and strife. In work and fun we are always together loving and caring for each other This, I wish would last forever. I LOVE you all! Dedicated to my loving family who have always been there for me and supports me in everything...*Love Maryam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2009 1:53:00 PM
This is how family should be. Always supportive and bound together by love. Beautiful write filled with so much love. Great job, Maryam! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:24:00 PM
Sweey Maryam, my little friend; you do not need any of the "no's" in the second verse. Great loving write and I'm sure those you love will greatly appreciate it! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:34:00 PM
Wonderful dedication to your family my friend. such love being embrace by your words throughout this poem. Great write.
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