Forever

Replaced, if you ever were
to me
life have no color.

It would be dark 
without no noise 
without no spark
without no joys.

To have you by my side
to always hear your call
to see your smiling faces
is the greatest gift of all.

Thank you for always
being there, in my life
helping me get through 
my pain and strife.

In work and fun 
we are always together
loving and caring 
for each other
This, I wish
would last forever.

 I LOVE you all!

Dedicated to my loving family who have always been there for me and supports me in
everything...*Love Maryam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gass Avatar
January 29, 2009 at 1:53 PM
This is how family should be. Always supportive and bound together by love. Beautiful write filled with so much love. Great job, Maryam! Love, Robin
Guzzi Avatar
January 28, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Sweey Maryam, my little friend; you do not need any of the "no's" in the second verse. Great loving write and I'm sure those you love will greatly appreciate it! Light & Love Debbie
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January 27, 2009 at 2:34 PM
Wonderful dedication to your family my friend. such love being embrace by your words throughout this poem. Great write.
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