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Forever

Forever



Galaxies reaching for infinity
Grains of sand that cannot be counted
Drops in the sea of immortality
Paths through the endless forest
Time a concept without foundation
Wonder at love that outlasts all.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/9/2008 8:28:00 PM

Dear Barbara,What a perfect Free verse POEM I feel the endlessness of time everyday waiting for the end of time YOUR POETRY FRIEND...HG---If I may Call YOU Barb, THANk -YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on SHE I Kn ow what the topic for the Nonet is going to be- " Barbara " For YOUR comment "I wish someone woukd LOVE me The way YOU LOVED HER" YOU are the second person to say that about one of my POEMS which is to say my Feelings were put on Paper and felt by another Please don't cryAlwaysHG

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/1/2008 1:41:00 PM

You have set my mind reeling with this one Barbara. I am often involved in discussions about time, a concept (without foundation) that I like to keep as simple as possible. I feel this inspirational write might spawn one of my philosophical blogs. Wonderful poem. Love, Nigel

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/1/2008 11:41:00 AM

I love this, it's so beautiful and simple. I love the whole concept, eloquently written. Thank you for your kind words on my poem, I appreciate it. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 12/1/2008 10:00:00 AM

I think this is absolutely beautiful. I always admire anyone who can do free verse. It is not a easy form, but you've handled it beautifully. I can learn a lot from you!

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/1/2008 2:35:00 AM

Beautifully said. Time is but an illusion, we have but the eternal now - and as you said, love. :) Love, Kristin

John Rhinem

Date: 11/30/2008 8:52:00 PM

"Very Beautiful Barbara!"~Penned amid depthful thoughts I could see~Filled with this gentleness & innocent, and sincere touch! And I, could wish nothing more for yourself dear lady, than for yourself to stand within that moment someday~In forevers paradise!~"Have A Beautiful Evening Dear Lady~Love Always To All You Love, John!"~"Sweet Dreams!":)