Forestry Friday







      It's black before dawn.
      Sitting here, feeding a fawn.
      Fish in a river, spawn.


               6/11/2021


          Rhymed Senryu


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Eagle Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 4:12 PM
This was so short and sweet!
Romios Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 11:50 PM
As Bob Hinshaw said, this form works for me. He was so right. Thanks Elena Pangie xx
Hinshaw Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Splendid senryu, Pangie. You have a special talent for writing this form of poetry - Bob H
Romios Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 11:48 PM
Thank you my friend. I know most here do not like rhymed haikus and rhymed Senryus. Sorry. I got a POTD on my first one. I feel happy and at peace composing them. The Unrhymed ones do not work for me Pangie xx. Thank you xx
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June 11, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Hello Panagiota, very nicely done. Hugs Darlene xx
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June 11, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Hello Panagiota, I am glad that you are doing better. My muse tells me what form to create a poem. Oh good Eddie will help you out with your I Pad. Hugs Darlene xx
Romios Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Hello Darlene! I agree with you. Thank you for taking the time to read it I prefer rhymed Haikus and Senryus than to the unrhymed. Eddie is here, helping me to master the new iPad. Am doing better, after my fall as well. Hugs, Pangie coo
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