Forestry Friday







      It's black before dawn.
      Sitting here, feeding a fawn.
      Fish in a river, spawn.


               6/11/2021


          Rhymed Senryu


Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/12/2021 4:12:00 PM
This was so short and sweet!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/12/2021 11:50:00 PM
As Bob Hinshaw said, this form works for me. He was so right. Thanks Elena Pangie xx
Date: 6/11/2021 2:23:00 PM
Splendid senryu, Pangie. You have a special talent for writing this form of poetry - Bob H
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/12/2021 11:48:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I know most here do not like rhymed haikus and rhymed Senryus. Sorry. I got a POTD on my first one. I feel happy and at peace composing them. The Unrhymed ones do not work for me Pangie xx. Thank you xx
Date: 6/11/2021 10:31:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, very nicely done. Hugs Darlene xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/11/2021 3:20:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, I am glad that you are doing better. My muse tells me what form to create a poem. Oh good Eddie will help you out with your I Pad. Hugs Darlene xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/11/2021 10:48:00 AM
Hello Darlene! I agree with you. Thank you for taking the time to read it I prefer rhymed Haikus and Senryus than to the unrhymed. Eddie is here, helping me to master the new iPad. Am doing better, after my fall as well. Hugs, Pangie coo
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