Forestry Friday

It's black before dawn. Sitting here, feeding a fawn. Fish in a river, spawn. 6/11/2021 Rhymed Senryu

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Elena Eagle

Date: 6/12/2021 4:12:00 PM

This was so short and sweet!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/12/2021 11:50:00 PM

As Bob Hinshaw said, this form works for me. He was so right. Thanks Elena Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 6/11/2021 2:23:00 PM

Splendid senryu, Pangie. You have a special talent for writing this form of poetry - Bob H

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/12/2021 11:48:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I know most here do not like rhymed haikus and rhymed Senryus. Sorry. I got a POTD on my first one. I feel happy and at peace composing them. The Unrhymed ones do not work for me Pangie xx. Thank you xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/11/2021 10:31:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, very nicely done. Hugs Darlene xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/11/2021 3:20:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, I am glad that you are doing better. My muse tells me what form to create a poem. Oh good Eddie will help you out with your I Pad. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/11/2021 10:48:00 AM

Hello Darlene! I agree with you. Thank you for taking the time to read it I prefer rhymed Haikus and Senryus than to the unrhymed. Eddie is here, helping me to master the new iPad. Am doing better, after my fall as well. Hugs, Pangie coo