Forest Trees

Trees in the  forest
The leaves fall spreading
Shedding piling down
No one rakes them
They just spread outward

When winter returns
With the first snowfall 
Bare trees are coated
With the snow blanket
Feeling dressed and warm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Brul Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 3:47 PM
Hi Darlene! It delights me to feel the serene ode to nature's cycles through this magical write...simple yet soothing in its imagery. More to come! Stay sweet and warm. ^__^ JCB
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Hello JCB Brul, I love to create poetry of nature. I see things in nature to write. I also watch the sky i am drawn to the clouds. i write about clouds often. i also write about shadows i see. so nice to meet you. enjoy your day my frkiend. /Darlene/
Brul Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 3:46 PM
Hi Darlene! It delights me to feel the serene ode to nature's cycles through this magical write...simple yet soothing in its imagery. More to come! Stay sweet and warm. ^__^ JCB
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 4:30 PM
Hello JCb, I let m y imagfination go with the flow of my pen, before i post my poem. enjoy your evening myfriend. /Darlene/
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 4:35 PM
Dear Darlene, You always amaze me with your descriptions of nature, particularly the changes of seasons. Your poems show how serene autumn is, changing slowly into the majestic snow! I admire your quiet observations and thoughtful reflections about nature surrounding you. Love and Friendship, Dear Poet ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 10:13 AM
Hello Mala, Hi! I am fascinated by nature. Mothe nature always shows me what to say. thank you for this wonderful comment. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/
Spilchuk Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Nicely done, seasonal change Autumn to Winter.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Hello Denis, yes seasonal change in my poetry. An early Merry Christmas to you my friend. /Darlene/
Buhagiar Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:42 AM
You accept the cycle of seasons. It is nature at its best. Lovely poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:24 PM
Hello victor, Thank you Victor. Yes it is nature's best. Thank you for the lovely comment., Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Romios Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Darlene! Stunning imagery, you know me))) like it green all year! 35 years in Chicago was more tha enough, love it sybbt and freen all year, It gets colder at night, but never freezing cold. Easier on wildlife, too. California Pangie.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Hello Panagiota, We had rain last night, with thunder and li8ghtening. The lighting was so bright that lit up a dark room. Yes you like the green. It is cooler here. it has been for awhile. The nights are cold. Hugs. /Darlene/xxx
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:10 PM
Very nice, Darlene. Thanks for reading my poem today.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Hello Andrea Dietrich, Hi! oh you are welcome. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Magdalinos Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Hello Darlene, a lovely poem, nicely done. Blessing my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Hello Mulu, Hi! How are you? thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Rodgers Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 5:43 PM
DearDarlene, ohhhh you beautifully captured the cycle of nature and the quiet beauty of change. I love how you convey the simplicity of falling leaves and the warmth of snow, creating a serene atmosphere. You expressed such a sense of peace amidst the transitions of the seasons. A very reflective piece. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 9:39 AM
Hello Daniel, When thew trees are bare they feel the cold. When the snowfalls the snow on the bare boughs feel warm. When it is freezing rain the bare trees sparkles lkike diamonds. Yes it is a sense of peace. Blessings my dear friend. /Darlene/
DiMino Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 7:21 AM
Beautiful! Thank you, my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 2:39 PM
Hello Joe Di Mino, Hi! thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy your evening my friend/Darlene/
Read Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Nature is the greatest artist of them all, have a lovely day Darlene. Xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 2:43 PM
Hello John Read, Yes nature is the greatest artiest of them all. Thank you i did have a lovely day. /Darlene/ xx
Gifford Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 1:54 PM
A wonderful piece, Darlene. Loved it. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 2:48 PM
Hello Zyrool Thank you for this wonderful comment. I did have a wonderful weekend. I hope you did to my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Narain Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Nice one.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Hello Jay Narain, Hi!, I hope allis well with you. thank you for the lovely comment. Enjkoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 7:56 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful "forest trees" write. Their pretty leaves must go so the snow can come. Maybe the trees need a warm coat. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:13 AM
Hello Paula, Yes when the leaves fall on our propert, we must rake them then bagged them , sending them to the dump. The trees will be warm once the snow coats them with snow. Hugs. /Darlene/
Cunningham Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 1:21 PM
You paint a winter wonderland with your words Darlene. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:14 AM
Hello tom Cunningham my friend. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Tor Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 12:12 PM
Nicely written Darlene. I can see all your leaves in your yard creating that blanket. When I see leaves I see work lol. We have had lots of rain so raking is out of the question for now. Your poem reminded me of all the work that is left to do...
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Hello Michael Tor, thank you for this wonderful comment. When i see the leaves spread on the lawn, i know i have to rake them. I hoping it will be the last raking to be done. Yes it reminds me of the work that needs to be done that is left to do. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 12:04 PM
- Yes, a nice warm coat of snow ... a beautiful sight in the woods, Darlene - hugs and happy weekend :) -
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes it would be a beautiful sight in the woods. the snow would coat the bare trees keeping them warm. Hugs. & happy weekend. /Darlene/
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