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Forest Trees

Trees in the forest The leaves fall spreading Shedding piling down No one rakes them They just spread outward When winter returns With the first snowfall Bare trees are coated With the snow blanket Feeling dressed and warm

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Date: 12/9/2024 3:47:00 PM
Hi Darlene! It delights me to feel the serene ode to nature's cycles through this magical write...simple yet soothing in its imagery. More to come! Stay sweet and warm. ^__^ JCB
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Date: 12/9/2024 4:29:00 PM
Hello JCB Brul, I love to create poetry of nature. I see things in nature to write. I also watch the sky i am drawn to the clouds. i write about clouds often. i also write about shadows i see. so nice to meet you. enjoy your day my frkiend. /Darlene/
Date: 12/9/2024 3:46:00 PM
Hi Darlene! It delights me to feel the serene ode to nature's cycles through this magical write...simple yet soothing in its imagery. More to come! Stay sweet and warm. ^__^ JCB
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Date: 12/9/2024 4:30:00 PM
Hello JCb, I let m y imagfination go with the flow of my pen, before i post my poem. enjoy your evening myfriend. /Darlene/
Date: 12/1/2024 4:35:00 PM
Dear Darlene, You always amaze me with your descriptions of nature, particularly the changes of seasons. Your poems show how serene autumn is, changing slowly into the majestic snow! I admire your quiet observations and thoughtful reflections about nature surrounding you. Love and Friendship, Dear Poet ~ Mala
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Date: 12/2/2024 10:13:00 AM
Hello Mala, Hi! I am fascinated by nature. Mothe nature always shows me what to say. thank you for this wonderful comment. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/
Date: 11/25/2024 7:17:00 AM
Nicely done, seasonal change Autumn to Winter.
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Date: 11/25/2024 9:52:00 AM
Hello Denis, yes seasonal change in my poetry. An early Merry Christmas to you my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/22/2024 2:42:00 AM
You accept the cycle of seasons. It is nature at its best. Lovely poem.
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Date: 11/22/2024 12:24:00 PM
Hello victor, Thank you Victor. Yes it is nature's best. Thank you for the lovely comment., Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/20/2024 2:07:00 PM
Darlene! Stunning imagery, you know me))) like it green all year! 35 years in Chicago was more tha enough, love it sybbt and freen all year, It gets colder at night, but never freezing cold. Easier on wildlife, too. California Pangie.
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Date: 11/21/2024 9:52:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, We had rain last night, with thunder and li8ghtening. The lighting was so bright that lit up a dark room. Yes you like the green. It is cooler here. it has been for awhile. The nights are cold. Hugs. /Darlene/xxx
Date: 11/19/2024 10:10:00 PM
Very nice, Darlene. Thanks for reading my poem today.
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Date: 11/20/2024 10:02:00 AM
Hello Andrea Dietrich, Hi! oh you are welcome. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 11/19/2024 10:41:00 AM
Hello Darlene, a lovely poem, nicely done. Blessing my friend.
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Date: 11/19/2024 10:44:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Hi! How are you? thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/17/2024 5:43:00 PM
DearDarlene, ohhhh you beautifully captured the cycle of nature and the quiet beauty of change. I love how you convey the simplicity of falling leaves and the warmth of snow, creating a serene atmosphere. You expressed such a sense of peace amidst the transitions of the seasons. A very reflective piece. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/18/2024 9:39:00 AM
Hello Daniel, When thew trees are bare they feel the cold. When the snowfalls the snow on the bare boughs feel warm. When it is freezing rain the bare trees sparkles lkike diamonds. Yes it is a sense of peace. Blessings my dear friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/17/2024 7:21:00 AM
Beautiful! Thank you, my friend.
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Date: 11/17/2024 2:39:00 PM
Hello Joe Di Mino, Hi! thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy your evening my friend/Darlene/
Date: 11/17/2024 5:05:00 AM
Nature is the greatest artist of them all, have a lovely day Darlene. Xx
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Date: 11/17/2024 2:43:00 PM
Hello John Read, Yes nature is the greatest artiest of them all. Thank you i did have a lovely day. /Darlene/ xx
Date: 11/16/2024 1:54:00 PM
A wonderful piece, Darlene. Loved it. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.
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Date: 11/17/2024 2:48:00 PM
Hello Zyrool Thank you for this wonderful comment. I did have a wonderful weekend. I hope you did to my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 11/16/2024 10:00:00 AM
Nice one.
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:10:00 AM
Hello Jay Narain, Hi!, I hope allis well with you. thank you for the lovely comment. Enjkoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/16/2024 7:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful "forest trees" write. Their pretty leaves must go so the snow can come. Maybe the trees need a warm coat. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:13:00 AM
Hello Paula, Yes when the leaves fall on our propert, we must rake them then bagged them , sending them to the dump. The trees will be warm once the snow coats them with snow. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 11/15/2024 1:21:00 PM
You paint a winter wonderland with your words Darlene. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:14:00 AM
Hello tom Cunningham my friend. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/15/2024 12:12:00 PM
Nicely written Darlene. I can see all your leaves in your yard creating that blanket. When I see leaves I see work lol. We have had lots of rain so raking is out of the question for now. Your poem reminded me of all the work that is left to do...
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:21:00 AM
Hello Michael Tor, thank you for this wonderful comment. When i see the leaves spread on the lawn, i know i have to rake them. I hoping it will be the last raking to be done. Yes it reminds me of the work that needs to be done that is left to do. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 11/15/2024 12:04:00 PM
- Yes, a nice warm coat of snow ... a beautiful sight in the woods, Darlene - hugs and happy weekend :) -
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Date: 11/16/2024 10:24:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes it would be a beautiful sight in the woods. the snow would coat the bare trees keeping them warm. Hugs. & happy weekend. /Darlene/

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