Forest Tree Tag

She wings just under the canopy
of this dense old forest
as we play tag under the trees,
speeding down a deer trail
I draw near and leap
  into a gray oak trunk
and spring to the closest branch,
muscles corded 
    I bound
from tree limb to tree limb
ever drawing closer
to her voluptuous rear.
When I draw close enough
I jump over her 
   and smack her behind
with the back of my hand,
          you’re it.

As I drop
  I change my direction,
catch a tree trunk
 with my forelimbs
and propel myself to the left.
My paws meet the earth
and I’m moving,
    sliding amongst the stalks.
Feeling the ever presence
of the shade of my heart
I dive under a dead tree
   laying across the path
and run off to the right,
just missing her touch.
Keeping within inches of each base
I zigzag through the woods,
she swooping left and right
  barely above the ground,
almost within reach.
I try to dig my claws in
and make a sharp turn
    to the left
but alas the soil is too loose
and I feel her claws
   graze my back,
            I’m it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/18/2009 11:11:00 AM
I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Mark. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2009 12:31:00 PM
nicely penned
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Date: 9/17/2009 11:00:00 AM
Delightful images in this playful poem, Mark! Your words allow readers to enjoy the game of tag as well. Thank you for sharing this uplifting write. It gave me a smile! Love, Carolyn
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