Forest of Never

The forest Of never
Beckons to me
branches waving
like the sea


Curious to see
what lay within
I lay down my pack
And wander in
round a boulder
through a vale
I did walk
as moon paled


All the way
the forest
whispered
shuffled and snorts
angry to ear
like a cold retort


As I meander 
slowly by
Rarely
do I see 
a glimpse of sky
Finally 
like a punch 
to the head
The trail 
just died
It stopped dead
whilst I pondered
my present condition
An idea?
A further proposition


The forest alive
it maybe
but not aware 
of my wandering free


Like a moth
to a lamp
was I to never
thus will be paired
like this forever …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 8, 2009 at 12:51 PM
I like the title. Interesting perspective. The short lines work well. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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June 15, 2009 at 2:45 AM
cool imagination Jayne! thanks for comments! Jim
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June 4, 2009 at 6:03 PM
never say never..hope springs eternal! Light & Love
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June 4, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Cleverly thought out poem Jayne, flowing words of never>James
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