Forest Fire

Dancing forest floors Trees suffer compound fractures Devil winds fueling

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Logan Saucillo

Date: 12/10/2009 2:18:00 PM

incredible.

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:18:00 PM

These devil winds have been fueling big style recently Abe, super Haiku>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/21/2009 6:59:00 PM

oh ....we see much of this up here in the nordland!....ya! you betcha! great haiku! Abe!!! jimbo

Date: 8/21/2009 6:20:00 PM

What a creative use of imagery for an interesting view. Nice use of personification. Keep up the good writing! Karen

James Fraser

Date: 8/18/2009 1:34:00 PM

Excellent Haiku Abe, awesome imagery>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2009 10:35:00 AM

Very descriptive I can hear the blaze and crackle. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2009 6:54:00 AM

Excellent write in light of what is happening again this year in Calif. Abe. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/18/2009 4:32:00 AM

Devil winds fueling..that line is pure fire my friend..nice.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/18/2009 4:20:00 AM

Forest Fire leading to destruction and feeling like the Devil has risen from hell,original and true--well penned--charma

Brian Strand

Date: 8/18/2009 2:17:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments today Abe.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2009 11:18:00 PM

Magnificent description of nature succumbing to the flames. Great work, Abe! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/17/2009 7:59:00 PM

We are having forest fires in Calif...some not more than 75 miles away...so this poem is timely to all Californians.... Well said!! ps...I admire all school bus drivers Abe....I am so grateful, as all three of my children were in their safe hands for many years! Bless you all!