Forest Fire

Dancing forest floors Trees suffer compound fractures Devil winds fueling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Saucillo Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 2:18 PM
incredible.
Fraser Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 1:18 PM
These devil winds have been fueling big style recently Abe, super Haiku>>James
Goff Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 6:59 PM
oh ....we see much of this up here in the nordland!....ya! you betcha! great haiku! Abe!!! jimbo
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August 21, 2009 at 6:20 PM
What a creative use of imagery for an interesting view. Nice use of personification. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Fraser Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Excellent Haiku Abe, awesome imagery>>James
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Very descriptive I can hear the blaze and crackle. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Excellent write in light of what is happening again this year in Calif. Abe. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 4:32 AM
Devil winds fueling..that line is pure fire my friend..nice.
Chircop Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 4:20 AM
Forest Fire leading to destruction and feeling like the Devil has risen from hell,original and true--well penned--charma
Strand Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 2:17 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Abe.Rgds Brian
Devonshire Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 11:18 PM
Magnificent description of nature succumbing to the flames. Great work, Abe! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 7:59 PM
We are having forest fires in Calif...some not more than 75 miles away...so this poem is timely to all Californians.... Well said!! ps...I admire all school bus drivers Abe....I am so grateful, as all three of my children were in their safe hands for many years! Bless you all!
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