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Forest Echoes

The woods awake, Daily praise resonates life; Woodland wildlife croon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 12:22:00 PM
To sit in a woodland at dawn is quite an experience Raul, and you have captured it with this fine Haiku>James
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:55:00 PM
Wonderful images once again Raul! Keep it up. I needed this one today. It's been a rough one.
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Date: 5/28/2009 11:28:00 AM
another great poem Raul, so beautiful God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/27/2009 10:24:00 PM
Great image of wildlife crooning a tune as the sun rises. Very romantic, at one with nature. Beautiful, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2009 8:03:00 PM
Music to my ears.....the sound of the forest!!
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:26:00 PM
I enjoyed the use of the word 'croon' in the last line. Vivid. Thanks.
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:34:00 PM
The second line is wonderfully done brother..daily praises resonates life...totally awesome line....your seriousness to your craft is so evident.
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:34:00 PM
Love the imagery in this one. I can almost hear the sounds of nature surrounding me. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/27/2009 12:52:00 PM
CREATIVE AND PICURESQUE NICELY FORMATTED GREAT JOB AS USUAL RAUL BRANDY
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