Forest Dreams

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Forest dreams as tender as a whisper 
soft spoken wishes in the penumbra of night 
Divinely assembled beneath a scried heaven 
we live, we breathe, we follow...

The evening plants begin to respire 
and the trees close up for the evening retreat.   
We sit and meditate while the dusk settles in,   
the candles burn surrounding us with light ! 
Woodland scents permeate the humid air 
 black orchid with notes of black truffle, 
patchouli, and vanilla, rum-soaked in black. 
 
We are never lost when we find ourselves 
centered as a Buddha in the thick of light
Tibetan flutes and magical newts by the lake 
each breath we take is an intake of peace 
we are semi-aquatic beings in the wildlife 

Forest  reveries as vivid as lucid dreams of old 
we stay green and pend, until we turn to gold.

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Date: 5/27/2025 7:45:00 PM
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Date: 5/26/2025 4:37:00 PM
Wow your writes just get gorgeouser and gorgeouser, this was breath of divine - amen to awe inspired writes ... CayCay
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Date: 5/26/2025 10:34:00 AM
We seem to have drifted apart. Part of my amnesia which comes and goes. A lovely poem. We have a small forest but after my accident I was not allowed to drive. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/26/2025 2:33:00 PM
Life gets busy Victor, I didn't know you were in an accident. I hope your ok, sending you good vibes
Date: 5/26/2025 8:39:00 AM
Hey sweet Vienna, such a beautiful and spiritual poem...
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Date: 5/25/2025 12:51:00 PM
Hello Rose, this is a great write and an enjoyable read. Loved the picture too. Have a wonderful day my friend.
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Forest Dreams" write. Great picture and ending. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/25/2025 12:22:00 PM
thankyou for reading my poem dear Paula, have a blessed Sunday : )
Date: 5/24/2025 10:42:00 PM
"We are never lost when we find ourselves centered as a Buddha in the thick of light" -- Wow! Love that. "Forest reveries as vivid as lucid dreams of old we stay green and pend, until we turn to gold." -- Fabulous writing!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/25/2025 12:22:00 PM
Thankyou for appreciating my poem today, Blessed Sunday Joe :)
Date: 5/24/2025 6:44:00 PM
i did spy'd your thinks and how vivid they are dear poet...nice see'n you...have a splendid summer..namaskar
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/25/2025 12:22:00 PM
You too dear James, thanks for your visit :)
Date: 5/24/2025 3:44:00 PM
Serene mood Rose. I've loved the forest since I was just a kid
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/25/2025 1:13:00 PM
I still have some of it left ;)
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Date: 5/25/2025 12:22:00 PM
lol love the new avatar, cool hair by the way Tom :)
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