Forest Choir

Melody of birds,
Nature’s harmony in trees;
Mantra of the woods.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lopez Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 8:35 PM
I love the sounds of nature. great job gangsta!
Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Chirp and cheerful this Haiku>>James
Hickman Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:33 PM
articulately written with the sounds flowing from the lines of this Haiku,very well crafted,,and Thank you for holding the contest and for reading and commenting upon my words,,blessings..Cecil
Higgins Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 1:52 PM
This piece is singing beautiful music to me ...I can hear the birds in harmony and the woods coming alive with their tunes...well done.
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June 27, 2009 at 1:18 PM
You do justice to this form, each and every day, Raul. As an added note, thank you for sponsoring the new contest...it is enjoyable to see how each poet finds unique and wonderful things in the same painting...each one takes a new twist..a lovely idea you had! :) Carrie
Wilson Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Paul, it seems like we had similar thoughts today; nature and the divine. Nicely done.
Neal Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Wow, the singing of birds is peaceful. A mantra indeed, and great decriptions. Nice work. Love Elizabeth
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