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on the forest floor the winter winds have woven ~ a carpet of snow For son of a senryu contest Sponsor: Braun Bailey. Written 21/03/2018.

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Date: 10/17/2022 8:37:00 PM
Autumn at its peak. Lovely haiku dear Tom.
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Date: 10/17/2022 9:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/13/2018 3:55:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Tom. Superbly done.
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Date: 9/13/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Line. Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 9/13/2018 3:17:00 PM
Lovely picture. Congrats to you.
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, Went away for a few days last winter and got the inspiration from what I saw on the forest floor. Tom
Date: 9/13/2018 3:14:00 PM
What a beautiful visual and poetic picture, Tom. Congratulations. Wendy
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Wendy, happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 9/10/2018 12:05:00 PM
wow..I liked this one very much
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Date: 9/10/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Debjani, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/27/2018 10:52:00 AM
Hello Tom, you painted a beautiful scene with your words.I enjoyed the scene before reading your poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/27/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Darlene, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/25/2018 11:46:00 PM
Gorgeous photo, gorgeous haiku.
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:08:00 AM
Nature can be devastating at times but sometimes provides beautiful things Tom
Date: 3/25/2018 5:47:00 AM
Oh, this is so beautiful Tom. I love it :)
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Date: 3/25/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi. Tom.
Date: 3/24/2018 10:47:00 AM
absolutely beautiful haiku and I love the picture too Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Jan, I got the inspiration from longleat Forest where centerparcs was. It was a beautiful sight to see the snow on the forest floor, hopefully we won't get any more now, I think we have had enough.lol. Tom
Date: 3/23/2018 1:58:00 PM
Great Haiku Tom, but no more winter winds please, well written. :))
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Date: 3/23/2018 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Roy, getting colder at the weekend ,I give up. Even mentioned snow. Had enough of winter now its getting boring lol
Date: 3/23/2018 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful Tom! (As is the picture too!)~Che :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl, lets hope spring is on the way now. Tom
Date: 3/22/2018 7:49:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:34:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Tom
Date: 3/22/2018 6:55:00 PM
simply beautiful!
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Tom
Date: 3/22/2018 12:11:00 PM
Hi Tom , very nice Haiku my friend :::::)))
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Date: 3/22/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Niall, heard there's more on the way.
Date: 3/22/2018 10:34:00 AM
Hi Tom, What a splinded haiku. With good imagery:-)Alexis
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, hope all's well. Tom
Date: 3/22/2018 10:00:00 AM
indeed they have and reports they are coming back for a third go... sigh... when will it end????
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:39:00 AM
Thanks S.O., yes I heard, round three.At centerparcs at longleat forest and the snowy carpet gave me the inspiration.knowing our weather we'll go straight into summer.
Date: 3/22/2018 9:05:00 AM
A heavenly carpet you have woven my friend, Tom!
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios. A heavenly beauty indeed.
Date: 3/22/2018 3:18:00 AM
Tom I love these Haikus and Senryus of yours, such imagery, I really don't know how you do it my friend. We can only try and learn from the master, thats you ...Maria :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:30:00 AM
Thank you Maria, I must admit I'd never heard of them until I joined soup but they fascinate me and its a challenge trying to create a vivid image in three lines. Don't know about master lol, I'm still a student. Tom
Date: 3/21/2018 7:35:00 PM
your haiku brush... paints a winter vista... for my wall... thank you... .................................................................Mick
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Date: 3/22/2018 2:53:00 AM
Thank you Mick, yes mother nature provides the canvas and stunning colours Tom
Date: 3/21/2018 1:16:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Tom.
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Date: 3/21/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Line, Tom
Date: 3/21/2018 11:54:00 AM
Lovely haiku!!
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Date: 3/21/2018 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. Tom

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