Forest

The leaves fall slowly Beetles veiled in falls blanket The wind blows gently
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 9:50 PM
I can see that perfectly, nicely done.
Cooper Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Casarah, again my appogies for not thanking you for the visit earlier. love Shane xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Very beautifully written. I see you have talent.
Cooper Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, i think i posted it too soon though i have a revised version that i will repost tomorrow. love Shane
Meade Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 10:12 PM
I enjoyed your haiku -- self-sustaining nature! 7
Cooper Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Thank you David, I have been reading a few by Jan Allison and thought i would try my hand at one. Have a great day.
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