Foreigners Now

My best friend and I
Keep ourselves secret
Within the soft whisper
Of our headscarves-
Yet a beginner 
In this disappearing act,
I still need her help;
In danger of falling over
Ourselves and each other
In the backseat of the car,
We giggle-
Over misplaced pins
And her mother's admonitions
From the front seat-
As my disguise is applied;
A blue scarf...
A simple, sky-blue scarf...
She wraps the fabric,
Adjusts folds,
Pins it down, 
Until a new blue frame
Edges my vision-
The different perspective
Is familiar enough to me,
And she as well,
But we know
To everyone else-
We will be foreigners now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rogers Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 11:35 PM
Had to read this one three times before I got it!-Cute nostalgia... xoxoxo//Sinclair
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February 12, 2014 at 12:01 AM
I think you should do as your mind, heart, and soul tells you!...every poem is not for every one! What is most important is are you happy with it as is, and is it "For You"!...xoxoxo//Sinclair
Hartley Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 11:56 PM
Do you think I need to make it more clear or its ok as is?
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