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FOREIGN COFFEE sluggish pulse room ahiss percolating this fetid heart foreign coffee funnel brown muck muck funnel smut searching for words plopping like mud © Kim van Breda—8 January 2016

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Date: 1/9/2016 3:10:00 PM
The "SLUGgish" pulse. The "SMUT", "MUCK", and "MUD"... Awesome choice of words Kim! The imagery is placing the bubbling brown brew in front of me; and it's not a pretty sight!
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