Foreclosed

They held such hopes, down deep inside
....But now the hope is shattered pride
A brand new haven in the sun
for those whose lives had just begun

This was their sweet retreat, a resting place
But now all that's left, is neglect, and sad disgrace!
The windows are dark, with no life within
No children to play, no school to begin
A door is locked and bolted...the neighborhood decays
Green grass has turned to brown, and hearts have turned to clay
Disrespect and disrepair
Broken spirits...tears...despair
With broken glass and wanton care
Just emptiness is waiting there

For those who tried to hold on tight
They tried and failed, but lost the fight
What's to become of those who lost
What bitter pills, at sorrows cost?
Where do they go to lay their heads?
No place to sleep, to make their bed?
Can't someone help, to make it right?

Where is the help for those who juggle
This constant fight, this constant struggle?


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For Judy Konos Contest: Forclosure
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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 12:37 AM
Many congratulations Carrie xx
Konos Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 3:38 PM
Thank You for entering my contest
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Well done congratulations.
Flach Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 7:44 PM
Carrie, your poems read so easily to me. The rhythm of words just dance so smoothly through my head. Add to that the clarity of thought and the continuity of story and it just clicks so perfectly for me. A sad tale you weave here but achieved so beautifully you almost loose the sadness through the beauty of the words, rhyme and rhythm. Nicely done, young lady!
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Outrageous Rhyme". Love, Carol
Chappell Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 12:14 PM
excellent write again carrie thank you [duncan]
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Yes, Carrie. Where is the help? where is the justice? While the fat cat bankers that started this whole thing get off scott free. Very good topic for this writing. Luv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Many congratulations Carrie for this deep poem.
Fraser Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your fine win in Catie's contest with this exceptional piece. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Congrats Carrie on your win in Catie;s contest with another brilliant write .. enjoy yur win this happy weekend with luv..
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Carrie
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 8:59 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Carrie. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:35 PM
enjoyed reading today! so sadly true!
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Very powerful thoughts nicely expressed in this write for Outrageous rhyme, Carrie
Devonshire Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Carrie, I'm still trying to find out to the elderly woman across the street who lost her home to foreclosure. About half the homes on my street are for sale now. Where is the compassion for poor Americans in need? Thanks for your comments. I think you'll do great in Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn
Locksley Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 1:46 PM
The plight of the homeless seems to be ignored by the powers that be, Carrie. Your poem packs a hard punch and should do very well in Catie's contest. Best to you, Diane
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