CayCay Godwin Poet Sijo

Foreboding Silence

Tightened muscles tweak foreboding trills marking his silence

while aches of shrill shadows pit my paled bravado against loud fears -

my love etched heart would bear any truth hit to free us both.





April 30, 2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2018 at 12:20 AM - Congratulations on this great winning poem, CayCay :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 8, 2018 at 9:45 PM Enjoyed reading ,CayCay,congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Silent One December 8, 2018 at 10:37 AM A very good sijo for the contest CayCay.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jannie Breedt May 6, 2018 at 5:43 AM Hi girl. Men feel cornered when they have to talk. Just ask him about the engine parts. That much is explainable. Hee hee.

Viv Wigley May 2, 2018 at 9:00 PM Ooooh, tense. Nicely done, cayCay, good luck in the contest x

John Gondolf May 2, 2018 at 12:33 PM Very nicely written, CayCay, best of luck in the contest. John

Richard Lamoureux May 1, 2018 at 12:15 AM You did this so well. Goodnight Cay Cay. CayCay Godwin May 1, 2018 at 7:38 AM Thank you, Richard. I admire your writing so much that it is always uplifting to find you on a page of mine. I hope all is golden in your world. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Harry Horsman April 30, 2018 at 4:10 PM Brilliant subject, an amazing sijo. CayCay Godwin May 1, 2018 at 7:39 AM Thank you, Harry - I love your succinct and uplifting comments, appreciate having your reaction. Be well ... CayCay

Allan Terry April 30, 2018 at 10:36 AM Short and sweet. CayCay Godwin May 1, 2018 at 7:41 AM So is your response! Thank you for leaving 'words' here, Allan, that were delightful to find. Blessings ... CayCay