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Foreboding Silence

Tightened muscles tweak foreboding trills marking his silence while aches of shrill shadows pit my paled bravado against loud fears - my love etched heart would bear any truth hit to free us both. April 30, 2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2018 12:20:00 AM

- Congratulations on this great winning poem, CayCay :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2018 9:45:00 PM

Enjoyed reading ,CayCay,congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2018 10:37:00 AM

A very good sijo for the contest CayCay.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jannie Breedt

Date: 5/6/2018 5:43:00 AM

Hi girl. Men feel cornered when they have to talk. Just ask him about the engine parts. That much is explainable. Hee hee.

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/2/2018 9:00:00 PM

Ooooh, tense. Nicely done, cayCay, good luck in the contest x

John Gondolf

Date: 5/2/2018 12:33:00 PM

Very nicely written, CayCay, best of luck in the contest. John

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/1/2018 12:15:00 AM

You did this so well. Goodnight Cay Cay.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/1/2018 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. I admire your writing so much that it is always uplifting to find you on a page of mine. I hope all is golden in your world. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/30/2018 4:10:00 PM

Brilliant subject, an amazing sijo.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/1/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Harry - I love your succinct and uplifting comments, appreciate having your reaction. Be well ... CayCay

Allan Terry

Date: 4/30/2018 10:36:00 AM

Short and sweet.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/1/2018 7:41:00 AM

So is your response! Thank you for leaving 'words' here, Allan, that were delightful to find. Blessings ... CayCay