Foreboding

Foreboding...
The air is thick, too still, too deep,
a hush that lingers, holds its breath,
as if the world itself won’t speak.

Foreboding...
Shadows coil along the walls,
not moving, yet not quite still,
watching, waiting—silent calls.

Foreboding...
The wind hums low, a hollow tune,
whispering secrets through the trees,
warning that something is coming soon.

Foreboding...
A footstep sounds—but you are alone,
your pulse quickens, your fingers shake,
a chill that settles in the bone.

Foreboding...
The door creaks open, darkness stirs,
a presence lingers, unseen, unknown,
a voice that whispers just one word... Run.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Bordner Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Captivating..."as if the world itself won't speak..." Nice!...J.A.B.
Leach Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Justin--so glad that line stood out to you. Sometimes the silence says more than the storm, and I really appreciate you catching that subtle thread.
Bass Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Foreboding indeed!! A great suspense builds when reading this! Wonderful thriller Alesia! Feels like it would make a great trailer for a flick!
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