Forbidden Rose

scarlet streaked with yellow
I lean in to inhale her scent
I reach out to feel her touch 
she pricks me
and I bleed
bleed her yellow fever
bleed her scarlet fever
she needs me to bleed
so gladly I bleed
scarlet streaked with yellow...

she grows
she flourishes
in my garden of pain
and delight...

Dedicated to 'The Rose of Texas' - Irma Linda (PD)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/29/2018 8:22:00 PM
I am quite jealous dear Tim. Such a beautiful poem my friend.
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:54:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your "Favorite Flower win." SKAT
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:40:00 PM
Wild like the rose, I must have vicious when in vase Swallow the aroma... Passion acknowledge the tropical beauty enjoy the inspirational tease bondage and bandages of needing, aroused by the pain aroused by the danger Inviting... Touch my wilderness I stick, you bleed stroke, with fever, chills viral & unexpected, "I am The American Plague" Wild like the rose, you must have
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Date: 11/5/2015 8:41:00 PM
A fav ... ~Amri Lin~
Date: 11/5/2015 3:27:00 PM
wow, what a fantastic free verse she has inspired from you, Tim. I love this!
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:59:00 PM
ohh, you never lose your poetic agility, tim... a rose so beautifully described, i sigh!..huggs
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:56:00 AM
This is such a unique and lovely poem, full of startling imagery and bitter-sweetness. And constructed of many layers, I think... which will garner another read or two (or ten).
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:51:00 AM
A powerful dedication!
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Date: 11/5/2015 6:41:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Tim ! - I wish you a wonderful day - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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