Forbidden Love

As I lay here under the stars. 
I take a trip down memory lane.
And I'm transported to a time 
when I was deeply and madly in
love.Your embrace was my safe 
harbor. When I was in your arms 
all was right in the world. Our love 
story was a gift from God. But the 
world around us wasn' t ready for 
such a love.I could remember it
like yesterday, You were so hand-
some. A greek god could not hold 
a candle to you. Your fair skin was 
flawless and your blue eyes were 
more lovely than the sky on a great 
day.And your physique took my 
breath away.I think I fell in love 
with you instantly. In a strange voice
that I barely recognized as my own,
I blurted out “ Young Sir”Do you need
anythang else? As I recall you must 
have been smittened with me as well 
because you didn't answer for a long
time. You always told me that you 
loved my caramel skin and my big 
brown eyes. You always referred to 
me as your African princess.When 
you finally spoke you simply said 
no.From that day on we were two 
young lovers who was forbidden to 
love because of the color of our skin.
When your parents found out about
our secret love affair I died a million 
times in one second. They shipped 
me to another plantation in another
state.I longed for you to find me but 
you never did.I will never forget how 
you made me feel,you didn't see color 
you saw me as the love of your life. My 
darling I felt the same and I will love 
you until I breathe my last breath.





My Grannies Love note




1-18-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mills  Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 9:41 AM
It is so nice to be in love with someone and feel safe by their side. I have a multi-racial son.? Why do some haters attack based on skin color. It makes naked sense to me.
Bangalee Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 4:54 AM
lovely described -Your fair skin was flawless and your blue eyes were more lovely than the sky on a great day /// enjoyed I/// from the forbidden love the entire of God are exposed!
May Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Very sad but a very loving story Alexis
Neumann Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Very sad and strong. I did not expect the ending as her being shipped away. True ancestral story or poetic licence or both?
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:06 PM
beautiful but so sad Alexis ... and sadly in the world prejudice continues to this day:-( hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:30 AM
This is a sad story and for some people it is still a taboo to this very day. My first wife was from British Guyana and in the early 80s we dealt with prejudice. My wife now moved here from Honkong when she was a little girl and I have people who assume I brought he over from China or Thailand to Marry her. (We met in Mexico 23 years ago).
Dome Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:35 PM
This one haunts me. such a rotten world, they could have been so happy together. Makes me angry but sad. Thanx for sharing. best wishes, Pete.
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Forbidden love, unfortunately, sprouts not just from the imagination, but from truth which for many years brought grief and anguish to many. You brought all this to life, Alexis with these sad lines. ~ Regards // paul
Vaso Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Alexis, I loved this, from start to end, I love story telling poems such as this! Hugs
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Arthur
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:53 AM
- A lovely love story, which has a sad ending - ..... i love happy ending ...... wish there was a happy ending, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Trifiatis Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Love should be and it is today, in most parts of the world, color-blind! Unfortunately, it wasn't like that in the past and that has caused so much pain and suffering as in this magnificent narration of yours, dear Alexis! I only can imagine your granny's desperation! What a loss! What an injustice committed against God's most precious gift: LOVE! A seven, my dear one!
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Demetrios, thank you so much for you kind and thougtful comment- Alexis
Scars Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:12 PM
This is so sweet and a fine piece of history..-luloo
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Laura
Boddie Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:24 AM
just what is the color of Love....for that color must be held above....anything petty which may inspire pain....because Love comforts and Love Heals just the same....and since Love comes from the heart, it must be sincere....so isn't it obvious that the color of Love is simply clear....;)
Y. Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Eric, I really appreciate your rhyming comment that could be a poem that could be poems as well. Thanks for being the first to comment- Alexis
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