Forbidden Door

I opened the door
the door that led to the living room
she was sitting on the same couch
my two brothers standing beside
jealously vying for her affection
little sister sitting on daddy’s lap

so peaceful, so serene
the fireplace crackling
spitting sparks…
all was as it should be
as it should have been
so very long ago…

from the edge of vision 
that other door, forbidden
don’t open that door, daddy warned
something’s in there, daddy warned
little sister was squirming, sweating
she screamed...

opened that door…
someone, something appeared
something appeared at that door
looked back for my daddy
the living room empty, vacant
frozen fireplace
cobwebs in corners
I screamed…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Very opened ended work that leaves the person wondering exactly happened..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Eastman Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Good one. Congrats on the win.
Roper Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations on your win a7 .Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Tim, this is a wonderful win. WUV **SKAT**
A   Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Wigley Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Dammit, I shouldn't have read this- can't go out of the room now..... I want my Mummy!!!! Chilling write, Tim. Well done. Regards, Viv
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 9:09 PM
OH MY, is this what I think it is?? Very dark, Tim. ME LIKEY. BIG congrats in the contest.
Lawless Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 8:13 PM
OK---OK---what's going on!!!!! When is the next installment coming.....??? Loved the sudden shift from color to black and white, light to darkness. Thanks for participating in the contest Tim
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