Aditi Mishra Poet Limerick

Forbidden Cake

He found a box of brownie cake
sprinkled with silver sugar flake.
Ah! Hidden weekend treasure,
ate with forbidden pleasure,
stays bed ridden with bellyache.

August 30, 2020

Limerick Fun Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Syllables: 8,8,7,7,8 checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Paula Goldsmith September 7, 2020 at 1:02 PM Congratulations on your win. Your brownie cake sounds wonderful. Can I have some???? OH no, no bellyache for me. A sweet write. Enjoy your win........

Sam Kauffman September 6, 2020 at 2:43 PM Ouch! A little too delicious! Where are the antacids! Congrats and kudos my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2020 at 12:35 PM :))) ... well done :)))

John Watt September 6, 2020 at 12:11 PM Clever lim, Aditi, and a good warning about those forbidden pleasures in the kitchen. Congrats, my friend ~ John

Tania Kitchin September 6, 2020 at 8:36 AM Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!

Jan Allison September 6, 2020 at 8:22 AM LOL serves him right lol:-) congrats on your win Aditi :-) hugs Jan

Krish Radhakrishna September 2, 2020 at 10:22 AM Very nice! A very good one Aditi!