Forbidden

Down a crooked Arab street,
A grey eyed soldier strode;
And shrouded to her feet,
She stepped from her abode.

Now luck may shield a favored wife,
Who leaves the harem hive;
But emptiness is in her heart,
When she is one of five.

If black eyes shine with secret fire,
And meet the yearning eyes of grey;
The ancient story of desire,
For sure will have its way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/5/2012 5:19:00 AM
very,very,,forbidden,,i love your poetry,,and your titles,,,and i enjoy reading them even more,,,kind of hooked on them,,,thanks for liking,,,my collab,,it was so fun,,im learning so much.....
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Date: 10/15/2011 6:06:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Wesley, Forbidden made an interesting read I must say.
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Date: 9/26/2011 11:29:00 AM
I loved this one the first time I read it and couldn't resist reading it again - the first line really sets the scene perfectly, and the whole poem is very insightful, my friend
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:20:00 PM
with so few words you are able to light up a chunk of life..love it, liz..thanks for your comments
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:08:00 PM
you've got soup mail
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:21:00 PM
they'll do that some time, very good write, Lizzy
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:09:00 PM
that is usually the way of it, Elizabeth. Interesting triple quatrain you've penned
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:40:00 PM
Once again, you've filled the page. With words of wisdom that come with age. The story is a silent yearning. With desire that is deeply burning. Be glad we live where we are free. Where the heart can find it's destiny.
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:21:00 AM
'For sure will have its way'. Interesting write. Loved it. bl
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Date: 9/6/2011 6:17:00 PM
Nothings more attractive than the love you cannot have. Nice write
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Date: 9/6/2011 3:28:00 PM
Oh those forbidden love and desire.. This is an awesome write Elizabeth, enjoyed the imagery as well ;) wilma
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:21:00 PM
Very well written, and an interesting story. I loved the way you ended it. Once again, an excellent write. And thank you for your consistent visits and comments.
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Date: 9/6/2011 5:34:00 AM
Marvellous piece Elizabeth! I was so absorbed in this short tale that I've must of read it 10 times! You could definitely write a screenplay from these three stanzas alone! Love the subject matter and imagery of characters you display in another wonderful form of rhyme! What would my eyes do without your words?
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:42:00 AM
Great writing Liz - A creative, truthful, short and descriptive piece here. Enjoyed.
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:16:00 AM
wow i totaly gets this poem knowing the religious beliefs helps to understand this even more so awesome poem i love it when i can decode a poem and actually grasp what you mind was thinking at the time you wrote this poem 7up
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:29:00 PM
A nice Arabian tale here. Thank you for your kind words on the elegy I wrote for my father. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/5/2011 4:34:00 PM
Wonderful write lovely Lady Elizabeth and an very insightful about the culture....with love......old Jack
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Date: 9/5/2011 4:26:00 PM
Awesome piece, my friend - I could visualise this scene perfectly
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Date: 9/5/2011 2:37:00 PM
Very passionate work..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 9/5/2011 12:53:00 PM
absolute food for thought here, what a wonderful poem, love this. Harry
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:52:00 AM
Women's lib in a hajib. Can it happen? Hope so. Your poem paints the picture perfectly.
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:19:00 AM
Fantastic write Elizabeth! You've got great creativity flowing through your veins! Thanks for sharing this magnificent poem!!
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:07:00 AM
Steamy work of art... enjoyed on my Monday morning.....Michael
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