Forbearence

Forbearance 






Rusted doors open slow,
For water to form ice,
Sunset to again rise,
To revive the lost glow,
Clear the restricted flow,
To strengthen the weak ties,

Need patience and courage,
For broken hearts to mend
happy they might pretend,
To speak mind; encourage,
and hamper the scourage,
Pain we must comprehend,

As thunders turn us wise,
aghast leaves in surprise !





Hexsonnetta in Iambic trimeter
Written August 28th, 2015
For contest by Andrea

Awarded HM

Entered for "Contest 216- any form any topic" poetry contest by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/22/2015 9:06:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/21/2015 4:17:00 PM
I really like your metaphors, Dr. Upma! Words of wisdom nicely presented. Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/21/2015 3:11:00 AM
Hi Upma! You treated 'forbearance' with able and wise words. I enjoyed this entry...pity the rules let you down:( Congrats are merited:) ~~ All the best. // paul
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Date: 9/20/2015 11:20:00 AM
Congrats Doc :) Smiles
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Date: 9/19/2015 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Upma. Thanks for your visits to my poems. I wish I had more hours in the day to be on poetrysoup.
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Date: 9/19/2015 6:13:00 PM
Nice win Dr, Upma congratulations
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Date: 9/19/2015 5:09:00 PM
Congrats for the HM, Dr. Sharma. You needed to put HexSonnetta in the top part where the title was. other than that, you did great with your effort to follow the rules of the form.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:30:00 PM
Dr Upma, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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