Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Sonnet

Forbearence

Forbearance 






Rusted doors open slow,
For water to form ice,
Sunset to again rise,
To revive the lost glow,
Clear the restricted flow,
To strengthen the weak ties,

Need patience and courage,
For broken hearts to mend
happy they might pretend,
To speak mind; encourage,
and hamper the scourage,
Pain we must comprehend,

As thunders turn us wise,
aghast leaves in surprise !





Hexsonnetta in Iambic trimeter
Written August 28th, 2015
For contest by Andrea

Awarded HM

Entered for "Contest 216- any form any topic" poetry contest by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick September 22, 2015 at 9:06 AM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Sandra Haight September 21, 2015 at 4:17 PM I really like your metaphors, Dr. Upma! Words of wisdom nicely presented. Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus September 21, 2015 at 3:11 AM Hi Upma! You treated 'forbearance' with able and wise words. I enjoyed this entry...pity the rules let you down:( Congrats are merited:) ~~ All the best. // paul

Edward Ebbs September 20, 2015 at 11:20 AM Congrats Doc :) Smiles

Faye Gibson September 19, 2015 at 7:38 PM Congratulations, Upma. Thanks for your visits to my poems. I wish I had more hours in the day to be on poetrysoup.

Michael Tor September 19, 2015 at 6:13 PM Nice win Dr, Upma congratulations

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2015 at 5:09 PM Congrats for the HM, Dr. Sharma. You needed to put HexSonnetta in the top part where the title was. other than that, you did great with your effort to follow the rules of the form.

Skat A September 19, 2015 at 4:30 PM Dr Upma, congrats on your HM win. SKAT