Forbear

Love in a salted wound
I could wait months, or years for 
Finality
For absolute seizure, by your fingers upon my blighted heart
I speak in words like

Devotion
Desire

But its all lost in my disorganization,
Promises I can only hold above my head
Like a great weight
Supporting you and I
As long as you can hold your attention 
Without looking away from my frailties
My own erosions-  that as they fall,
Pass through you, 
Like snow between the bare branches of my heart. 

I am forever winter in the lack of 
Your presence. 
Waiting for the soft sound of your 
Footsteps in the lifeless air. 
Some sign of your journey here,
That does not echo back to me,

This is only a dream.

I wait
and wait
and wait
and there is only....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Julia. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Julia. Love, Carol
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February 13, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Thank you so much Debbie, and everyone....I deeply appreciate your kind words and support :)
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February 12, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Hi Julia - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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February 11, 2011 at 9:27 PM
Love how you ended this one. And the wintery images, wow it could even have worked in Chris' winter contest!! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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February 11, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on winning in Debbie's contest with this entry. Good writing.
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February 11, 2011 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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February 11, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Congrats Julia on your big win in Debbie's contest with this awesome write and entry luv.. enjoy your top spot.. sweet success..
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February 8, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Please enter this in my free verse contest! Light & Love
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May 16, 2010 at 5:41 PM
very awesome! To my fav's...this is exactly how...most of us feel waiting for true love!
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