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I always look at things in a way that surpasses it's view like is transparent something that I can see through example I can take you the person who's reading this poem and you ask yourself how did he get this form how does he put the words and thoughts together it's simple ,but not, and it's cleaver I know this poem has to get better so I sit here and think what would a person think when looking at this I know one would said this young man has talent words are simple but big like a mammoth and I know with these words I could civilize a savage I mark this as a classic all my word is done to express my every thought and it's yall who I sought so that we can exchange are creative walks So if you like this poem I have more coming in a deadlier form these words take form so please grab them by there horns and ride out with it and always remember if you touch the sky you still can pass that limit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/17/2016 11:36:00 PM
Jorge, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/8/2008 3:50:00 PM
Is this you Roque, my long lost friend from Guayama?
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Date: 9/29/2008 7:13:00 PM
Within the mind, ahh we never know what is our next thought, that in turn, makes a wonderful write. Loved this, Always, Christy
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