For You the Reader!

I always look at things in a way that surpasses it's view
like is transparent something that I can see through
example I can take you the person who's reading this poem
and you ask yourself how did he get this form
how does he put the words and thoughts together
it's simple ,but not, and it's cleaver
I know this poem has to get better
so I sit here and think
what would a person think when looking at this
I know
one would said this young man has talent
words are simple but big like a mammoth
and I know with these words I could civilize a savage
I mark this as a classic
all my word is done to express my every thought
and it's yall who I sought
so that we can exchange are creative walks
So if you like this poem
I have more coming in a deadlier form
these words take form so please grab them by there horns
and ride out with it and always remember if you touch the sky you still can pass that limit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 17, 2016 at 11:36 PM
Jorge, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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October 8, 2008 at 3:50 PM
Is this you Roque, my long lost friend from Guayama?
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