For You

I do and will love you, as the sun loves the moon.
I will die every night, to ensure you breathe every day.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

February 4, 2021 at 9:51 AM

Hello Pax Geist, a poem of deep love. Enjoy your day my friend.

J Hamilton Gist

January 24, 2021 at 12:25 PM

I feel this way, also for my family.

Franci Hoffman

September 24, 2020 at 4:57 PM

Wow! This is beautiful! So much said in a few words.

Marilene Evans

September 24, 2020 at 4:28 PM

Beautiful poem.... Keep writing

Camp Cab

September 23, 2020 at 5:27 PM

Very nice and to the point.

Brandy Nicole

March 7, 2020 at 10:09 PM

I am holding these words so close. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I shall place this in my favorites. Because. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy

Sandra Adams

February 7, 2020 at 10:05 AM

wow....so much beauty in so few words... this is exquisite.... hugs

Pax Geist

February 7, 2020 at 7:28 PM

I wish I had the time to create more, yet this thing I do to pay taxes has taken far too much of my time since November.... I need to escape more often. :)

Pax Geist

February 7, 2020 at 7:14 PM

Your observations are always welcome.... I once was called a wordsmith, yet to me I am just writing that which flows through my mind. Your writings are far better. :)