For You

I do and will love you, as the sun loves the moon. I will die every night, to ensure you breathe every day.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/4/2021 9:51:00 AM

Hello Pax Geist, a poem of deep love. Enjoy your day my friend.

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/24/2021 12:25:00 PM

I feel this way, also for my family.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 9/24/2020 4:57:00 PM

Wow! This is beautiful! So much said in a few words.

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/24/2020 4:28:00 PM

Beautiful poem.... Keep writing

Camp Cab

Date: 9/23/2020 5:27:00 PM

Very nice and to the point.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/7/2020 10:09:00 PM

I am holding these words so close. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I shall place this in my favorites. Because. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/7/2020 10:05:00 AM

wow....so much beauty in so few words... this is exquisite.... hugs

Pax Geist
Date: 2/7/2020 7:28:00 PM

I wish I had the time to create more, yet this thing I do to pay taxes has taken far too much of my time since November.... I need to escape more often. :)

Pax Geist
Date: 2/7/2020 7:14:00 PM

Your observations are always welcome.... I once was called a wordsmith, yet to me I am just writing that which flows through my mind. Your writings are far better. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/6/2020 11:15:00 PM

Simply beautiful! It's in my faves. :)

Pax Geist
Date: 2/7/2020 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, and I do mean that, as at times I simply write what I think. :)