For Us

For Us Like divine visions, they dance and bouquets of roses are tossed over their feet… No matter what they say, it consummates as poetry and chills might run the spine… They construct bridges and go on to design dazzling towers. Crowds gasp! They tell and re-tell the legends, braiding the fabric of generations… They wander wonders and inspire creativity… They see rainbow lights ringing round souls and look up with awe to glimpse heaven’s glory! (c) sally young eslinger 5/28/2024 Thanks be to God…

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/4/2024 3:54:00 PM

Sally, you never disappoint. The study of early poets is our story too. I am curious... what inspired you to look into this part of our common history? It seems like something special for sure.

Mike Bayles

Date: 6/4/2024 8:25:00 AM

Breath-taking. Well-done.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/1/2024 1:04:00 PM

Omnipotent is the Muse! The spirit capable of immortal, new, both profound and lighthearted creation. What is awesome science today is primitive tomorrow. Only the artist, in free fall, spontaneous manifestation, knows the fears and triumphs of living on and over the edge of the moment of true breathless, dangerous, lovingly perilous rapturous experience. Love your poem!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 11:44:00 AM

"For Us" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/30/2024 9:35:00 AM

Dear Sally, your poem soars with profound insight. The dancing visions tossed bouquets, and chilling spines transport me to a realm of awe and wonder. You have a nice mix of creativity that bridges generations and inspires souls to glimpse heaven's glory. A dazzling, legendary work that leaves crowds gasping. Bravo! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/30/2024 3:15:00 AM

May we glimpse Heavenly glory when we depart. Blessings.

Tonye George

Date: 5/29/2024 8:01:00 PM

They do so much to remain creative Sally. "They wander wonders and inspire creativity." Lovely piece. Cheers.